Reviews for Another Chance
F Maurice chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I like it!
kiiss.the.raiin chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
This story is bloody brilliant!

I could never right something like that!

Amaazing! :)

-Gabbie
Pinkjimmychoos chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
This was a beautiful story. I too have a soft spot for Ron/Hermione and you depicted the scene very well, particularly the way you represented the characters thoughts and emotions. I also thought the length of this was just perfect as it is! Brilliant job :)
soulterror chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
wo great story loved it so touching _
callmefall chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Wow. I had never really thought about what happened there... that was good!
Samara Connor chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
this story was sad and happy. i really like it. i found it on . i really like it.
tati chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!
NonymousMay chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
aw!

this is so sweet!

i LOVED it.

faving.

- o n,

~w e n

ps- sorry for the short review...school...hehehe...
kathygreeneyes chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
That was perfect. So emotional and sweet, just complete perfection. Brilliant!
DCoD chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
I love your Missing Moments-type stories. They always fill in the blanks where JK Rowling left off... I always wondered what happened between the moments that Ron took Hermione to the cottage, and when Harry next saw either of them. I can just imagine how distraught Ron was.

Poor Ron. I can't begin to fathom how I'd function if it were me in such a situation. The only thing keeping him moving is getting Hermione to safety, getting her the help and care she needs. His own comforts be damned.

'“Oi!” Ron barked, coming out of his thoughts. “What the hell do you think you’re doing?”

His brother glanced up at him and raised his eyebrows, which covered blue eyes – so like Ron’s – that were full of worry. His gaze seemed to say “you’re going to worry if I’m taking advantage right now?” Ron blushed and looked away in chagrin.' - I love Ron for this, 'cause even when it's obvious Bill wants nothing more than to help Hermione, he'll make a fuss if he thinks any type of wrong-doing is being done to her. That is a great guy.

And he's still an even better man, not wanting to leave her side when she needs him the most. Beating himself up for not being able to protect her, to keep her as safe as possible, even knowing the dangers they'd surely encounter going on this journey with Harry. He is, without a doubt, one of the best men I've ever known, fictional or not.

Fleur, hehe.. always knows just how to make Ron forget how to talk, whether because of her own beauty, or speaking aloud the thoughts Ron has floating through his head like that.

Hermione sure knows how to get Ron to express himself fully. Even if it -does- take him a little bit to get there.

'“Ron, I—I heard you, back at the manor. You were screaming my name, like hearing me undergo the—the Curse was also hurting you, too.”

It was! Ron wanted to yell out loud, but instead he shrugged and looked away from her. In a surprising show of strength for someone in her present condition, Hermione reached up and took his face in her hands, forcing him to look eye-to-eye with her.

“That’s kind of how I felt when you were poisoned,” she continued seriously, in that same soft tone of voice. “Like it was tearing me up, as well. Knowing that there was nothing I could do about it, well, it was the most terrible feeling in the world. Then finally hearing that you were going to be all right...I—I don’t think I can describe the way it—”

“Like you were so happy you wanted to jump around, laugh, cry, and be sick all at the same time.”

She smiled widely, and a light that Ron couldn’t remember seeing before came into her eyes. “Yes, exactly like that.”' - Love love love this moment. It's almost like a picture-perfect definition of love itself. The moment one's object of love is in danger, hurt, or saddened.. one feels just as undone. And the same can be said once there's relief, happiness, recovery. As Ron so easily voiced.. to be feeling so many things all at once. Quite a step up from being a teaspoon, huh? heh

Poor Ron, doesn't want to be the butt of a joke should Harry find out he'd been crying over having Hermione in his arms, to have another chance with her. Though, I seriously doubt Harry would be so crass.. I think he, of all people, could understand.

I loved the ending. Canon or not, I think Ron could have easily reacted like this as opposed to bumbling his way through this emotional period. After all they'd been through already, after finally returning to Harry and Hermione only to go through such a terrible thing, to hear and see the one girl he loves most go through something so horrible... it was perfect.

Thanks again for sharing your lovely story!
EmRosey chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
I loved the emotional Ron!:)
kelly marie 123 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Hey, I actually really liked this fic. I thought it was very well-done and it made me think more about the connection between Ron's poisoning and Hermione's torture. Oddly enough, I'd never thought about that parallel before. And I thought this was very in character. This was my favorite part:

“That’s kind of how I felt when you were poisoned,” she continued seriously, in that same soft tone of voice. “Like it was tearing me up, as well. Knowing that there was nothing I could do about it, well, it was the most terrible feeling in the world. Then finally hearing that you were going to be all right...I—I don’t think I can describe the way it—”

“Like you were so happy you wanted to jump around, laugh, cry, and be sick all at the same time.”

So cute! I love when they have their little mature moments. Anyway, yeah, very good story, and I'm glad you didn't have them kiss-that would have been kinda gross, considering Ron had just thrown up, eh? lol. Props.
XxX chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Ithought this was great!It almost made me cry!I don't hate it!

I don't see why you didn't think it was true to canon!It could possibly have been shortened a bit more, but i wouldn't have wanted you to!
serendipities chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
yeah..i thought it was plenty canon. great job!
reflectionette chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
? how is this not true to canon in anyway?
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