Reviews for Pursuit
Starseeded chapter 30 . 3/26/2008
Fantastic :) Simply fantastic :D
blood shifter chapter 30 . 3/10/2008
hehehehehehe. she threw a shoe at hatchet. that was good. update soon please.
0ArmoredSoul0 chapter 30 . 3/10/2008

Poor kid.

Losing her mom, finding out about giant alien robots from outer space, and meeting her long-lost Dad all in one day.

No wonder she's chucking shoes at people!
Bluebird Soaring chapter 30 . 3/10/2008
Very interesting twist you've added! I like the depth of backstory and the way you tell us about Bryan's past life right as it crashes into the present. And his chat with Ironhide was so bittersweet ( Poor Hide, and it fits so well with his character...more!
MC chapter 30 . 3/10/2008
I really cant be bothered logging in lol,

Nice chapter, wonder how Jasmine is going to react,

Typical reaction from her too, lol a shoe...That made me laugh.
HURRICANE'Hannah chapter 30 . 3/10/2008
yah i loved this chapter cant wait till the next one :D
ArmoredSoul chapter 29 . 2/25/2008
Lemme guess.

Premium Gas is like getting a fancy dinner.

Blood Shifter2 chapter 29 . 2/25/2008
that was really funny. i liked it. please continue.
Alissa the gummybear chapter 29 . 2/25/2008
brilliant job...

update soon
SkyHighFan chapter 29 . 2/25/2008
Nice. If only every innocent person chased by the cops had that kind of backup.
ArmoredSoul chapter 28 . 2/20/2008

Chromia and Ironhide.

The two biggest explosion experts this side of the galaxy.

Well, not including Wheeljack.

That guy is just an accident WAITING to happen.

With a large mushroom cloud.
blood shifter chapter 28 . 2/20/2008
very good. yay! chromia is up. aw. no action. keep it up.
Alissa the gummybear chapter 28 . 2/20/2008
brilliant job well done
ArmoredSoul chapter 27 . 2/17/2008
Two words:


Cazcatharsis chapter 27 . 2/17/2008
carbombs and a possible fake Starscream suicide vid? Interesting... :D
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