Awww! Such a nice and warm ending. They totally deserved each other. I love your story!

She definitely lost control but I'm glad Fate is there to stabilize her. Oh what a dramatic chapter!

I super love this chapter. Nanoha is truly in her devil mode. Plus possessive mode I guess? So sexy!

I totally agree with you. Fate just gives off this vibe of being a tease. She’s gonna be great at it I bet. Nanoha juatbdowsnt stand a chance! Thank you for this wonderful chapter.

Agree! Nanoha can be quite scary when she needs to be and when you’re on the other side of Raising Heart, you better start praying! Love your other character!

Nanoha is super HAWT when angered.

Sweet and sexy!

If Nanoha is not sexy acting dark and unforgiving then I do t know What is. Super interested to find out what’s the deal of Takeru.

Another wonderful chapter. I like this so much because hey are so sweet to each other. Especially Fate being such a tease.

What a big turn on! Really Nanoha being ruthless is just awesome!

Oh wow! Dark Nanoha is amazing. I ship I ship!

Hey dear author! I know im late-really late-but ive just discovered this fic of yours tonight and OMG i-sooo-love-it!
I felt the drama/angst to my bones and as well as the love (oh yeah).
So THANK YOU SO MUCH! As well to those whoever helped you in writing this.
Im so delighted to have read this.

What a great story! I had no idea what to expect after choosing this story at random, but I'm so happy I did! This was beautifully written. Everybody was SO in character, even through the huge range of emotions and situations they went through. WD!Nanoha was perfect; terrifying and vengeful, and how she dealt with it afterwards was superbly handled. Desperate, tortured Fate, still trying to save Nanoha's conscience was perfect, and then the teasing later on was adorable. You really got the characters perfect, which made this a great read.

Wow nice fic.. i really like the plot hope you make more!

Can I please have Takeru show up in a post-StrikerS fic I've got on the back-burner? He's not the Big Bad - far from it - but he shows up and stirs up some significant trouble... and this ends up biting him in the ass big time.