Reviews for White Devil
Dee chapter 3 . 6/4/2019
Awww! Such a nice and warm ending. They totally deserved each other. I love your story!
Dee chapter 2 . 6/4/2019
She definitely lost control but I'm glad Fate is there to stabilize her. Oh what a dramatic chapter!
Dee chapter 1 . 6/4/2019
I super love this chapter. Nanoha is truly in her devil mode. Plus possessive mode I guess? So sexy!
Dee chapter 3 . 6/24/2018
I totally agree with you. Fate just gives off this vibe of being a tease. She’s gonna be great at it I bet. Nanoha juatbdowsnt stand a chance! Thank you for this wonderful chapter.
Dee chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Agree! Nanoha can be quite scary when she needs to be and when you’re on the other side of Raising Heart, you better start praying! Love your other character!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
Nanoha is super HAWT when angered.
Dee chapter 3 . 3/22/2018
Sweet and sexy!
Dee chapter 1 . 3/22/2018
If Nanoha is not sexy acting dark and unforgiving then I do t know What is. Super interested to find out what’s the deal of Takeru.
bubble.duckie chapter 3 . 9/13/2017
Another wonderful chapter. I like this so much because hey are so sweet to each other. Especially Fate being such a tease.
bubble.duckie chapter 2 . 9/13/2017
What a big turn on! Really Nanoha being ruthless is just awesome!
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
Oh wow! Dark Nanoha is amazing. I ship I ship!
Fei0937 chapter 3 . 8/10/2017
Hey dear author! I know im late-really late-but ive just discovered this fic of yours tonight and OMG i-sooo-love-it!
I felt the drama/angst to my bones and as well as the love (oh yeah).
So THANK YOU SO MUCH! As well to those whoever helped you in writing this.
Im so delighted to have read this.
Steveaaml chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
What a great story! I had no idea what to expect after choosing this story at random, but I'm so happy I did! This was beautifully written. Everybody was SO in character, even through the huge range of emotions and situations they went through. WD!Nanoha was perfect; terrifying and vengeful, and how she dealt with it afterwards was superbly handled. Desperate, tortured Fate, still trying to save Nanoha's conscience was perfect, and then the teasing later on was adorable. You really got the characters perfect, which made this a great read.
Lance58 chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
Wow nice fic.. i really like the plot hope you make more!
D.K.N chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
Can I please have Takeru show up in a post-StrikerS fic I've got on the back-burner? He's not the Big Bad - far from it - but he shows up and stirs up some significant trouble... and this ends up biting him in the ass big time.
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