|Reviews for Mojo Mayhem|
| Eminnis chapter 15 . 3/15
This was great! I can't stop laughing!
I like how you added in the part with Frenzy and Barricade. So sweet. Ratchet is too.
Great job again!
| Horser01 chapter 15 . 12/19/2011
I loved that story! I favorited it and I wouldn't have minded if it was twice as long either! I read through the whole thing in a couple hours, and now I am off to find the sequel! ...Let's watch Judy and Ratch fight over 'thier' dog... Hehe... *Blinks away the evil look* ...Do you imagine Megatron would fear their wrath in face of the dog...? o.O
| Horser01 chapter 10 . 12/18/2011
O_O Ratchet is turning into Judy... O_O
| Horser01 chapter 8 . 12/18/2011
That was just... It was so... *Random string of incoherent sputtering, giggling and snorts* Love this... XD
| Horser01 chapter 4 . 12/18/2011
ROFL! Oh this was priceless! Thank you! I was depressed before I started reading this story, but not anymore! XD I was busy imagining Optimus doing a weird little shuffle with a chihuahua and I laughed so hard MY dog came to see what was wrong with me! And he looks almost exactly LIKE Mojo too, so that made me laugh harder! Lol! This story is SO going in my favorites... ;D
| EHSparkwoman chapter 15 . 12/18/2011
Sniggers* Too funny! Another story I wish there were more like!
| Minirowan chapter 15 . 12/14/2011
Now that was funny! I don't think I've laughed that much in a while!
This was an amazing idea and I'm glad you came up with it. The famous Autobots dog sitting a chihuahua? Priceless! I love how Ratchet got so attached to the little guy and even dubbed him an Autobot . That was really cute and touching. I was hoping you'd get around to explaining femmes to Sam and Mikaela, that would have been an added bonus to all the hilarity that ensued. I never really thought of these guys as so playful and rambunctious!
Anyway, you did a great job. I'll make sure to check out the sequel.
| Metalchick36 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I love this so far! But I'll have to read the rest later, it looks like a lot of mayhem is gonna ensue, especially since I can see you wrote fifteen chapters! Can't wait to find out if Mojo also has encounters with the Decepticons!
| SomeOneYouDon'tKnow LOLZ chapter 15 . 6/30/2011
awww! this was so sweet and adorable
i freakin luvd it
my 2 fav things (dogs and tfs) wrapped up in 1! how could it get any better than that?
thanks for writing this, i laughed so hard i bet my neighbours cud hear me
off to read the sequel XD
| Unesheet chapter 15 . 5/26/2011
Wow. I liked it. It was funny, and I loved seeing the Autobots acting so childish. And at the end, when Barricade put Frenzy in his chest, did he realize Frenzy was covered in dog pee?
| Artemis1000 chapter 15 . 6/12/2010
This story is absolutely hilarious, I love it!
| CosmicEssence chapter 15 . 4/20/2010
This is without a doubt one of the funniest things ive read in a long while! Truly! It had me outright laughing on some occasions and absolutely snorting on others lol.
Ratchet's affection is good, amusing and kinda sweet how he'll miss him (though i think all the bots will miss the hilarity of the past week!). The image of Optimus walking a dog and Mojo 'thinking' that he doesnt want this idiot, he wants his Ratchet...lol that cracked me up :D Optimus' payback is perfect, and heck yeah! Ironhide would SO react like that. Ita almost a shame this cant be made into a film (i mean come on it would flop in cinemas) but damn, wouldnt it just be the funniest thing to see _. Then Ironhide's payback and well i dunno just the image of a wriggling ironhide is funny too. Plus Mojo staking his claim on Hide's bed and the way in which you wrote that exchange of Hide 'Out' Mojo 'bark' as well as...well just the way in which some parts of this fic is delivered are amusing withot being silly you know. It adds something to the whole thing that wouldnt normally be there otherwise. The fact that this is a serios fic (it practically oozes serious) it works awfully well. I think if you'd made this too hilarious or ridiculous and didnt keep them so in character it wouldnt have worked so nicely. Guess its all that transformers you watched while writing this huh?
Frenzy was class. His reaction to it all, another fav. then Barricade to the rescue and his hesitancy over Mojo, another (in fact the whole scene with Cade was good)...Bee's constant 'help' with the dog and his picking up rude bits of culture is interesting, sometimes funny sometime not. Though he does seem completely over the top at times. There a few interactions i dont like or some comments that dont seem to fit and of course a number of parts i havent mentioned that are just as good/great/brill but...I dunno, i cant really explain it except that IF something like this got into the movie this is how i'd want it to be...loved it. Thanks _
| angelsweet2011 chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
HOLY CRAP! did you know im following ur story at on iTunes? I love the story. When r u going to put more chapters on that site? I love being able to listen to it where ever i go.
| Cybernetic Mango chapter 13 . 2/1/2010
All I could think of when you said "Your Mojo" was Austin Powers.
"I NEED TO GET MY MOJO BACK"
| Gixxer Pilot chapter 15 . 9/8/2009
Holy crap, I laughed myself silly reading this and can say, with certainty that this is one of the main stories that attracted me to this fandom. The mental image of big, badass, I-kick-anything's-ass Optimus Prime walking (and being undone) by a five pound dog is PRICELESS. The characters are perfectly done, the plot was wonderful and the dialogue is excellent. Bravo!