|Reviews for I Want To Go Back To Bed|
| Idril Elle chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
lol i LOVE this fic & im favoriting 4 sure!
keep up the good work! :)
| MysticValkyrie chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I hope L's foot healed okay, lol. I thought the whole thing was relly cute, and it's going on the favorites list.
| kittycatslegacy chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Uh is this yoai I think it sounds a little that way but maybe I got it wrong.
| east-side-stories chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
loved it. L was in-character, except for him jumping around...
i REALLY dont se that happening...
but then, if it got Light on top of him, no harm done.
| nightingale27 chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
wow .I Like your in the last part of the story the personality of the characters changed
| Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
SO CUTE! MORE PLEASE!
| Captain Cheese chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
lol funny and cool. But it totally dusnt need to be M rated if u not guna go into detail about what exactly they were doing
| Kakashii chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
It was very...short. Use of language is sometimes awkward. Many a time you begin a sentence using "Raito..." and "L..." and "He..." or "The..." While complete and structured sentences are very awesome indeed, a story can seem more interesting if you varied your sentences more (you could NOT begin every sentence with a noun, for example).
Also - the plot itself is a little weak. I think it's unnecessary to follow a particular format when writing. However, I do think that there needs to be some sort of climax or at least a distinct "exciting part" (which this fic lacks). Anyway - choose your words carefully and...deliberately
| SerenNoir chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Very well-written with a lot of imagery...at times you spelled Raito 'Ratio' and there were a few grammatical errors but other than that a really awesome job for your first deathnote fic
| Flagfish chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
This was very good and I want more - so write more - okay? Okay.
| The-Dark-Archer chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Ooh this was really good
| Lovely Spell chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
this was a nice one to read. I really did like it. L in charge is good.
| Sacred Phoenix Of Nephthys chapter 1 . 7/28/2007