Um, what is the point of this story?

Bravo. A moving and excellent piece indeed. Pure genius, sheer brilliance.

You MUST continue writing! I don't know if that was meant to be THE end, but I found it a cliffhanger. I loved your story so much, that I need more! Literature is a hunger that cannot filled. Mine especially. I may sound negative, telling you what to do or something, but I promise I'm not. And THAT, was literature. Does Maddy meet Erik (POTO) again? Has Christine entered his life? If so, what of Maddy has this insane jeasousy of the two? Amazing plot twists! Aside from the assumed ending, du staem, youve made an astounding piece.
-your humble servant,
AW
(I love that sign off! Erik adoration!)

Wow! Interesting! though I have to say that I'm not sure I like the thought of her Phantom abandoning her and leaving her to catch pneumonia. Erik would never do that to his Christine. But maybe I should read Part 2 before judging absolutely. Anyway, I like your writing. Very poetic I do hope you complete this story.

I'm really confused...

Excellent! The characters and plot were developed wonderfully, and the suspense building throughout the work was masterfully done. Even if one did not know who Madeleine's "insane and beautiful angel" is, this is still a fantastic work of prose. Very well done. :)

This is very good! Quite enjoyable! You are a great author. Keep up the good work :) I can't wait to read more of your writing.

oh that was so well written...and so mysterious! I love it I love it I love it! Gotta read the other story you wrote about maddy

Oooh... *big-eyed* Eriiiiiiiik... I LOVED that story. The ending was beautiful... I, too, am a E/C fan (and an exploding Raoul fan) but I felt like doing something I've never seen before! And M/C leaves Erik to me! *grins* insane and beautiful angel... *dreamily* I wan to know what happened with Erik! Have you written a storym from his point of view? Anyway, thanks for the review... *smile*

I like it! I like it way much! What a lovely story. Madeline, eh? Hmmm...*thinks* Not a bad position to be in, actually. I hear you don't have to do essays in mental institiutions. But besides that, this is a great story, and a sequel is expected of you, punishable by any means necessary. A monster you are to keep one from us. But then, some things are best left alone...

Until Next (hopefully)

Erika :)

::dazed and confused::

I like this story! Please write more!

hey, this is extemely well written! Despite a few awkward moments (I really doubt the word 'vibes' was in use at that time) I hope that you do continue!

Wow. Awesome. Totally awesome. I love the "mysterious visit", which you never really reveal. Madeleine is a wonderful character, and, somehow, in the very back of my mind, she reminds me of Erik's mother, her namesake. Again, Bravo! ~Hank Riddle~

awesoooooommmmmmeeeeee~~!