|Reviews for what one thing can change|
| Lucas chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
This is a great story and well it kind of reminds me of something, but what it reminds me of is kind of different in a few ways, but anyway keep the stories goin great writter.
| lil cobra of the south chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
hey i like that you made it your own it good no it's not like every story is suppose to be written but the free spirt is kool i luv it i really do i hope you keep written on it