|Reviews for Doors to Let Out Life|
| MadnessJones chapter 1 . 10/10
Wow, you did a really good job with this story! I don't know what else to say except, great job :)
| caz chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
me and the girls were thinking abotu this fic tonight and it took us forever to find it. Glad we did. This is one of the best Miles fics out there.
| DCJeanetteMarvel chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
| nequam-tenshi chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This is heartbreakingly wonderful. I like the details are how well you portrayed Optimus.
| Manga154 chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
I kinda want to cry now...
It's a great little story.
| LunarLacrimosa chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
I absolutely love this short fic! Thank you so much for writing it. I really felt that Bay could have done a lot more with the slight Bromance between Sam and Miles, instead he practically just killed it.
I looked and I can't really tell if you're active anymore, so I don't really know if you'll even read this. But you really inspired me, and it's given me an idea. If I get around to it I'll work on it and probably post it with my other random ficlets, but I'd credit you for the idea! If you are active and don't like this, you can say no and I'll not do it and take it down if I have it up.
(Not sure if it will just be Miles meeting an Autobot through hitchhiking, or Miles meeting Optimus through hitchhiking too, but the basis of it. Pretty much everything else would be different though)
| transformedstarwarsgal chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
awwww this is really good :) it shows how bad Optimus felt about mission city you did a really good job
| Darth Krande chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
That is definitely somthing to think about. I love the point. And Pete is very-very sweet and in-character.
| Sear chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Thank you for this, it was in a way what I'd been looking for without realising it, dealing with both Miles, Optimus(' guilt), that bus and Mission City. And it was beautifully written.
| WiEGoP chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
This is a very moving piece Corax. I really and truly love it. Nice work on the "Pete" too. Pete as in Peterbuilt, and Pete and in Peter Cullen. I could really hear and see Peter in this story, great work.
| Cman710 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Wow, i was just looking through random stories and came upon this. It was incredibly well written, and heartwarming as well as very sad.
| ShiTiger chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
A deeper look into the life of Miles. And with Optimus thrown in too. I hope Miles finds out about the autobots in the second movie.
| SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
(plays Find Yourself) this was a nice but sad story. At least Optimus avenged her death by killing Bonecrusher
| gatogirl1 chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Thanks for this piece; watching Transformers again, you really see how much destruction is really going on during each of the fight scenes. This ain't the oldie cartoon, where the building falls over, but it was empty and it fell on an empty street or the Autobots manage to save everybody. Especially that part with the bus. I keep seeing (Who was it? Blackout?) bursting right through the middle of a bus without a care. Anywho, good piece- the solemn mood was well done; not overly teary, as if Amy's body has just been found, and also addressing the grief of the family of the dead.
| candle-rain-chan chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Thank you so much for sharing this one-shot. You did a great job at portraying Optimus Prime and everything. This definitely reached a heartstring!