Reviews for Coloring Silence
akirasatsuna chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
First, I want to say that you write beautifully. I first read Oracle and I am very impressed. And here, with Hayate and Yuugao (a pair that I totally adore), I must say you're truly amazing.

Second, as a nurse, I have seen death more times than normal people ever would and you were able to capture the feel of it. Of death, of despair, the anxiety of a loved one, even the changes that go on in a person's body.

I hope you write more stories because you're truly a great writer! :)
keemew2 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
lovely fic. sweet and endearing. i love how intensly she waits for him. i'm not thrilled with preseance tense, but it works. right now, my biggest question is...what happenend to hayate! you mentiond something about hypothermia but that explains nothing. (pouts) youre mean.
ferret assassin nin chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
well, it's cute and disturbing at the same time. good description.
Renea chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Wow... That was grisly, disturbing, and well... brilliant xD You mamaged to say alot in a very short story, and that's fantastic
InARealPickle chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Oh God that was so sad!

At first I thought he was dead

Then I was happy he wasn't

Then I realized he was as good as dead

Way to play with a girl's emotions!
Cotton Candi Drug chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Aw, that's sad and cute at the same time.
rex chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
great tale. very moving i hope u would continue it with another chapter or 2
Asuka Kureru chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Oh man, evil. ;.;

beautiful imagery. I loved your use of colors and that bit with the kissing the tube. It manages to express a lot for so little words.

he’ll run the risk of drowning on his continuously dissolving lungs.

EEK. :shudder: evil, I tell you.