|Reviews for Move the Earth|
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
| psquare chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
A lovely piece of well-written Hurt!Sam!
The story flowed very well - the "normal" twist in the end did come as a surprise, though... kudos!
Excellent characterisation for the most part.
However, the ending segment did come off to me as a tad contrived and awkward - that's the only place where the flow of your writing suffered.
Also, a slightly more careful look-over could've removed redundancies like " "Sorry, Sam," Dean apologized. " and some scattered punctuation errors.
Take care, and keep writing!
| anon chapter 2 . 10/25/2007
Great job. Loved the little humorous moments scattered throughout to break up the drama, as well.
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 2 . 8/14/2007
Nice write. I enjoyed it very much.
| Dawn N chapter 2 . 8/14/2007
Excellent update :-)
| carocali chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
I really like what you did with this story, and I think you could probably even keep going with it. The idea of the voodoo man sensing the pre and post evil is really cool!
Was it really an ulcer?
| anonymous chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
Very nicely written. You took the story down a different avenue than I thought, so it was refreshing. Sam deserves a normal problem now and again.
Favourite line - "I think they thought I poisoned you and then gave you a bad tattoo."
| Poaetpainter chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
Woah... I don't know why it didn't even cross my mind that, that was what was wrong with Sam. Great buildup.
This is an awesome read!
| Dawn N chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Looking forward to more :-) Update soon!
| friendly chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
awesome start.. can't wait for more
| chat-noir-91 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
oh voodoo, gotta love voodoo... and hoodoo that's cool too!
LOVE this story!
please update soon!
| supernaturalsam chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Great start to this!
I really like how you are playing out Sam's emotions from his possession. It's good to know it's not something he just got over in the matter of a day, that it's still bothering him. Being in New Orleans and talking to the shop owner couldn't help him any. Especially telling him he'll be evil again to protect Dean...
And now he is sick with a Pentagram showing up on his hand...very freaky!
Can't wait until more!