Reviews for What's Wronge With It?
Avaron Shikai chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
What a great story...
Wings of an Angel 7445 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
...(drools) You sho-should defintley c-continue this... PLEASE! It's one of the best written, sexiest sstories I've ever read.
My.Thesis chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
I'm practically reading porn, huh? Damn...it's surprising what guilty pleasures can force you into. Not that this is my first time reading it. Just the GaaKank pairing.

Anyways, this was very well written. There are grammar mistakes with the dialogue - like how you wouldn't replace the period with commas. Well, at least 90-percent of the time. But other than that, wow. Decent incest is hard to find and write, alerady. But good incest is almost impossible to find and write. So, I guess, thanks for making this.

And, one more thing. I doubt you'll wanna go back to the story and update, but it doesn't hurt to ask...can you make a second chapter?
smashingmolko chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
friggen awesome! my favourite one so far :D its got a great ending that can go either way for a end of chapter OR an end of stroy. Personally i think you should write MORE PLEASE!
Ugawa chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
“That my little brother,” Kankuro said with a smirk, as he leaned against the T.V. “Is the act of having sex.” To say he was pleased with himself for coming up with this idea, would be quite the understatement.
this be a dead account chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
XD I started laughing when Gaara came down the stairs, and I couldn't stop laughing. XDD This is drop-dead hilarious! Gaara's so innocent and ignorant, and Kankurou's such a pervert- XD Ohmai, I wonder what Temari would think. " HILARIOUS
Akeiro-Akumu chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wow, I really like this story...I always love the sandcest yaoi )...Perhaps there is some kind of sequel in the works? *Praying there will be and crossing her fingers* -;;
darkshadowgirl666 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
haha totally freakin awesome lmao

i love how gaara is so naive in the beginning.

these kinda fics are so adorable

and i think if you did make a second chapter they would be just as good as tha first.

xx shadow xx
Anubis' Daughter chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
This was just plain hot and somewhat funny. Poor Kankuro. oh well, he got rewarded in the end!
Raven500 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
OH MY GOD!

I love this..I'm your fan now!
tigerballz chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Loved it!

Totally going on my faves.

:D
yaoilover93 chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
great story
Akira-Hisakata chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Another chap., please. \:)
zander herris chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
There needs to be more stories with ideas like these about gaara. I personally think this one is a classic.
Xyradis69 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Wow...thatz all i can say. Wow. That was fuckin awsome. And after i'm done reviewing this i'm gonna read it again. And maybe once more after that. Cuz itz hot like Gaara's red hair! LOL. I thought it was oddly...cute that Gaara didn't know what sex was. And who's a better teacher than good old Kankuro? LOL. I loved it. No complaints here exepct for the few typos but do i give a fuck? No. All i cared about was the story. Fuckin' awsome. I look forward to more of this kind of good shit.
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