Reviews for Honey
FUCKYOUASSHOLE chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
I'm going over every Gaara/Naruto fic written before 2009. When everyone STILL wrote about a Seme!Gaara and Uke!Naruto. The way it SHOULD HAVE STAYED!

Anyhow. Thanks so, so, so much for getting the order right! I really liked your story. Ha! I think Naruto is the only type of sweet that Gaara likes.

( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )

( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a )
zammmie4eva chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
hehehehe very kinky with the honey, though i kinda picture naruto being the one doing to honey thing to gaaa instead of the other way around...ohwell, it works both ways. LOVED it ;)
G-dot chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
This smut is incredibly detailed in such a way that it reveals everything from nothing at all.

The theme is well-embedded and Gaara and Naruto's escapades were welcomed. How you introduced the escapades and the liking of honey that maybe hinted off as the centre of this fiction are caked well together considering Gaara's resolve and how it goes away once the blonde is involved with him.

Gaara's cluelessness is hinted well. In addition, Naruto's more adventurous tendencies shows... however voyeuristic. Their relationship is summed up in a paragraph somewhere and how strained they can be to contact, especially in Gaara's case. The characterisation for Gaara is concrete and quite canon but for Naruto, the characterisation is only marred when he does not challenge Gaara even a little in teasing. Or even hinted the fact that he knew Gaara would eventually give in. But this character flaws can be deterred with a saving fact of the "I told you so" that the blonde holds. Remember that Narutonis a fox. He is very convincing which you have done pat down. He is very competetive but will eventually bend to Gaara's iron will. This should be a point of view in your characterisation. There all out. :)

The humour you sprinkled in this fiction is loved. They way it lights the whole theme is beautiful which justifies why I am going to finally out it in as one of my favourite stories. The peak of your humour is when Gaara had to stop the killing intent from one of the escapades. Nice touch.

More power! And beautifully written.
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Loved it..!

Great job..! Im adding this to my favorites

Keep up the great work
Redblade chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Simply put:


By the way, I like honey x)
NekoKiku of Love chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
that was cute but sasuke would have been better for this fic since he hates
Only The Hourglass Knows chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
guess who? P

your writing has gotten so much better, i'm completely amazed! i rather like the image you paint of gaara not liking sugar. he doesn't seem the type. i also like how this little *ahem* endeavor ends. it's very sweet (no pun intended).
Bounty Hunter Darcy chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Sweetness! Definitely gonna read again soon.
Izumiko chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
I like yaoi... And I think you write really good, but I've gotta go and practice walking in high-heels, coz last time I broke a toe...Damn Tara makeing me a bride's maid! *favs*
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
Cute and hot!
Kiwi Kitten chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
actually, its better than most. I mean my English teacher always tells us to 'show' not 'tell' our stories. And also how at the end of each story, we should 'restate' our intro. U could of added more showing words...but other than that it was awesome :)

ExplodingChickenOfDoom chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Love it!
Ana-Kat101 chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
I love it! I really do, it's very well written, don't worry. Such an adorable story x9
alyuchiha913 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Ohh...that was really cool! Me did a good job! _

Peace Out! _
13am13i chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
LOL! I loved this. It was so cute and sweet, and GAH! *huggles the fic*..*huggles you*

...Naruto moaning like a high class pornstar...has got to be HOT!

to me..this is inddeed a . off to read the next one in this series!


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