Reviews for Started With One HeartBreak
Ninja Unicorn chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
You spelled sparred wrong. Sorry I'm a grammar police it's just incorrect spelling is a pet peeve!
h1natalov3r chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
so cutee
reneelg1963 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
this is really sweet! I love that Hinata took the initiative and made the first move for a change! I know this is an old fanfic, but it is really cool!
kandita chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This is so sweet:)! Especially when Sasuke said"if u don't want it u do" that just made me like him a tiny bit's just so sweet
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This one shot was pretty poorly developed. Isn't sleeping with someone under the influence rape? Both characters were OOC and not for good reason so it wasn't believable. For example, how can Hinata, after just having her heart broke by seeing Naruto and Sakura kiss, confess her love for Sasuke? Seriously? The premise was a good idea, just overall poor story development.
TheLoverOfMusic chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Cute one-shot .! loved it :)
math music reading chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
That was beautiful and sweet.
hikarulight chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Too cute for words...
chancharan chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
awesome story... please write more...
meggoneggo chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Tw33ty JR chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
That was sad at 1st but then got sweet at the end
maggieannteslow chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I love SasuHina. They make the best pairing. Yeah! And if anyone says something about it, I'll kill them. Yeah! I think that Sasuke and Hinata were meant for each other, even though I hate Sasu-gay. Un! But I love your stories and one shots. Un! They are the best. Keep up the good work and I love this one shot. Yeah!
Akira Matakure chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
Is it supposed to be '"You really should drink..."' or '"You really shouldn't drink..."'
Uchiha's girl 66 chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
wow. that was awsome! one of the best stories i've eer read. great job!
Akira Matakure chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Great story. This pairing is one of my favorites.
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