Oh, this is heartbreaking but utterly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. :)

I have never read such a sad and beautiful story and I can't help but want to cry at their fate. This is a wonderful piece

you got my biggest respect out of all story and author how you killed and tell the stories of each character protecting and neglected them how you connect them the best i wish you deserved a ward

is this what naruto is like then he is weak in the anime

This story and its writing are engaging and so powerful. I am literally unable to put down this story and am sad that it never got to end.
This story even made me shed tears when Katashi died. It... Has been several years since I was last able to cry, and I can only feel two things with regards to this story now; awe at the power of this story and gratitude at the catharsis that it brought me.

I cried a little when Katashi died ...is your story already finished? i love it and the storyline..

i love this story so much..its a nice and amazing story!

this story is literally fucking amazing and you made me cry no less than three times but i'm so fucking annoyed that it's been abandoned for over fuckin 6 years ,, like this is the fifth abandoned story in a row. Like,,, I really fell in love with the characters and I ached for them, you know? I was angry on their behalf and I grieved with and for them. please, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!

Hey Author,you made me cry when Katashi died and when Naruto told the other jinchuriki that he is dead

You are a great Author, Dattebayo!

Keep the good you write more

I was planning on writing a big long review after marathoning this story, but honestly I don't think it's in me. It has grown to be such an emotionally draining reading that I can neither "enjoy" it, nor stop. I have cried, and shouted out loud in joy and frustration while reading it, but the more it progresses, the more it imbues in me a sense of spiraling despair. It's no longer about the quality of the writing (phenomenal) or the draw of the plot (intense) - every new paragraph causes me new anguish.

I don't necessarily mean this to be a negative review, simply an honest one. You certainly hold great power as a writer. Maybe I just wish for the genre to be anything more than tragedy.

Best wishes.

This chapter was profoundly beautiful to read. I haven't left reviews on the last few, though they were all spectacular, but I simply couldn't resist here. The dialogue and character interactions felt so profound and true - a whole new dimension of writing compared to chapter 1.

At some point while reading this chapter, I concluded that you're a very skilled writer. Your prose is very poetic and I can't fault your grammar or vocabulary.

I ain't saying it's perfect - some dialogue lines and plot choices are... questionable. But it's really pretty good, and better with each chapter I read.

Particularly neat chapter, though its interesting that all of Yugito's techniques were lightening rather than flame based, as she is often described as producing a black flame by you. Conserving her strength?

Sending a genin team to defeat 3 Jinchuriki, including 1 with unknown abilities... Are you cruel or stupid tsunade?

imma just say that there's no way the raikage or the anbu could be defeated that easily.