chapter 1 and naruto is shit. annoying af

chapter 1 and naruto is shit. annoying af

Look, it's me- a fool who loves this story and even after 8 years with no updates I still come back to reread what is here because it is so damn good. If you're still out there- you're an extremely talented person. I wish there were more.

Cry baby

OH MY GOD... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! The tears keep flowing

The tears just keep coming.
Oh no.
Best Jinchurikki fic, hands down.

Just saying, but even though Gaara has little skill in taijutsu, look how he defeated Lee. And I would say that he can react comparatively quickly, as he was able to replace himself with a sand clone without Lee noticing. To top it all off, he is pretty smart. He may not be such a great tactician as Shikamaru, but in canon he became Kazekage at age Fourteen! It would help to read Gaara Hiden to know more about him. No offense

you know, at last I remember to ask but... why none of them use henge no jutsu?

wow wow wow, what's about Tsunade sentimentalist thing? She doesn't know Naruto right? I mean if this fic starts when Suna atacks right? then Naruto doesn't know Tsunade, and Jirayas's gifts? what? the summoning contract? because at this point that would be the only thing

this Gaara seems more... mature, he seems something between the Gaara pre-Shippuden and the Shippuden one

Naruto performed genjutsu? that's... new? I really don't remenber he ever doing that

Since I read this once before and know the angstfest that is up ahead, happy ending version:
Sakura and Shinobu team up to find a magical way to heal Riko. The Jinchuuriki decide to stay in shadowland, but harbor a bunch of Konoha citozens, pulling off the biggest trick in history - making a ton of clones and making the other villages think Konoha effectively died. (Unrealistic hut pls let me live)
Akatsuki are forced to seek out the Jinchuuriki themselves, and are easily (shh its a fantasy it doesnt matter) defeated, but Kakashi learns what happened to Obito and finally starts to let go of his guilt. They are all happy forever and ever, no angst ever happens and no one dies in a tragic way,
Thanks for reading friends! *Closes eyes in denial* ~reality doesn't exist~~~

My god this is the saddest thing I've read in forever.

Why must you hurt me in this way
This is the best and saddest thing I've ever read. Thank you.

Oh, this is heartbreaking but utterly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. :)