ohhhhh so thats why im confused as hell! pffttt i need to look closely! it was made before naruto is finished! so thats why the baby is an oc omg im so dumb sorryyyy mann...:(

wtf... shi.. shikamaru?! what behavior is that to your bestfriend? what the fi never mind this is a fanfic anything could happen... that just made me shocked for a second sorry

ummm ok im becoming more confused...isn't hokou supposed to be in iwa? with Han? or this is a completely different au? pls i need answers pfftt

I don't know way people TALK about plot hopes in this fic

It was quite LITERALLY made before Naruto ended and that is one of the reasons i belivie a few jinchuuriki are the same like yugito while others are Just plain OCs

Holy shit, this has got to be one of the most moving fics I've read on this website. I hope you can find it in yourself to conclude the story, but regardless, thank you for writing as much as you have.
I hope you're safe, healthy and happy in these troubling times.

Warmly,
Kit

Ew this hope story’s is kinda just terrible The Raikage could probably whoop naruto if he was anything less then kurama state him self and naruto can’t even control 1 tail of chakra yet even at shippuden after years of training he could only master 2 two and kakashi V 1 tail naruto I’m sorry but kakashi would win even up to maybe 3 tails kakashi would win but at that point I’m not sure

I LOVE THIS YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

idk why there are so many weird comments talking about plot holes. this is a fanfic lol. anyway i read this like 4 years ago and it's still stuck with me on my list of faves so, you know, it was really good. very emotionally impacting. idk if you read theseif i were you i might notbut know that this fic has literally impacted who i am (in a good way).

I honestly never thought I could get so emotionally invested in an OC, but Katashi was amazing.

You really just changed Teuchi's name? His name has been known since 2003, a quick Google search would've handled it if you didn't know his name.

You really gave the pink banshee's mother the same name as best girl Ayame?

Isobu's introduction in the anime/manga was only 1 month after Yugito was introduced, and considering that this was created a year after Yugito was introduced you most likely already knew about Isobu too. There was no need to make the three tails and it's jinchuuriki an OC.

Naruto being able to spam Shadow Clones and his huge chakra supply is not just because of the Kyuubi, but also because he is an Uzumaki. I'm certain that the Uzumaki clan was already known when this fic was created.

Holy heck, wow, honestly don’t know what to say…

HAHA IM KIDDING
ITS HONESTLY AMAZING, ONLY ON CHAPTER 12, AND ITS NOT WHAT I EXPECTED, IN A GOOD WAY. BRINGS ME GOOD FEELING EVERY TIME I READ, HAHAHA!

(First part, read in Toko’s voice from Danganronpa, then to Genacider Syo’s voice on the second part.)

alright, I got three comments. First, I LOVE YOU KATASHI, he reminds me of Sugetsu, who is one of my favorite characters. Two, I got offended by a character, saying “HOW DARE YOU.” I’m dumb, I know. Three, is Gaara gonna die? I hope not, I really hope not.