Reviews for Life after the Battle
No offence meant chapter 10 . 12/29/2017
Those vows were shocking. As poems they were pretty good but in the context here they only took from the story. I'm talking about Harry's because there was nothing wrong with Ginny's.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/20/2017
Can be? You did leave it up in the air...
Rex chapter 18 . 2/25/2016
Iris394 chapter 10 . 2/10/2016
Hi, I'm not sure if you can still do anything about it and I'm sorry if I come across as rude, but it bothers me a bit that you misspell so many names. I mean, Fluer instead of Fleur, Dumbledor instead of Dumbledore, Rufus is supposed to be Rolf. If you're not sure how to write a name, please google it. Takes a second and looks much better.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
wait.. sri lanka?thats where i'm from
Estella Fawkes chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
Good one.
Ali chapter 18 . 6/10/2015
Just one thing. Keep Writing. I want More
frankiemorris99 chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
Please write more xx youare amazing x I could not put it down and finished it in a day xxxxxxx ! X write lots and lots more about Ginny, Harry and there kids. Also about Ron, hermione and there kids x I am the biggest Harry potter fan and I love love love your story's xx
frankiemorris99 chapter 18 . 8/13/2014
Please please please keep writing ! Up you are amazing and I could not put it down x please write more xxxxx I love your writing x all the chapters are amazing ! Xxx :) :) :) :) ;) :)
Guest chapter 18 . 4/14/2014
Holy friggen frig that was amazing I actually teared up. Your an amazing writer!
teagandenny chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
Write more please
Guest chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
Add more chapters :)
SlenderMonkey chapter 18 . 10/26/2013
Wow, that was gory! Nice description of the complex battle scenes; I could really see glimpses of so much happening all at once. In this chapter, as in the fanfic as a whole, I wish that there was slightly more transparency in characters: their mindset, thought processes, etc. Actions do speak louder than words, but don't forget the potential power of narration, either. Very passionate writing here. I can tell it was a labor of love.
SlenderMonkey chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
I like the brother-sister relationship between Harry and Hermione that's continued on from the books. But, about Harry being an Auror; I thought his grades were too low, and he didn't take the needed classes? Anyway, if the Ministry is short on personnel, and recovering from being gutted by Voldemort, I can understand how they'd widen their pool of candidates. Also, Harry Potter's fame and achievements have got to count for something.
SlenderMonkey chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
It's off to a good start; you've really set it up so that there's all sorts of things that might follow. Nice to have a glimpse of what a graduation might actually look like. I like that you acknowledge the year that this takes place canonically, too. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
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