Reviews for Life after the Battle
Rex chapter 18 . 2/25
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Iris394 chapter 10 . 2/10
Hi, I'm not sure if you can still do anything about it and I'm sorry if I come across as rude, but it bothers me a bit that you misspell so many names. I mean, Fluer instead of Fleur, Dumbledor instead of Dumbledore, Rufus is supposed to be Rolf. If you're not sure how to write a name, please google it. Takes a second and looks much better.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
wait.. sri lanka?thats where i'm from
Estella Fawkes chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
Good one.
Ali chapter 18 . 6/10/2015
Just one thing. Keep Writing. I want More
frankiemorris99 chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
Please write more xx youare amazing x I could not put it down and finished it in a day xxxxxxx ! X write lots and lots more about Ginny, Harry and there kids. Also about Ron, hermione and there kids x I am the biggest Harry potter fan and I love love love your story's xx
frankiemorris99 chapter 18 . 8/13/2014
Please please please keep writing ! Up you are amazing and I could not put it down x please write more xxxxx I love your writing x all the chapters are amazing ! Xxx :) :) :) :) ;) :)
Guest chapter 18 . 4/14/2014
Holy friggen frig that was amazing I actually teared up. Your an amazing writer!
teagandenny chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
Write more please
Guest chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
Add more chapters :)
SlenderMonkey chapter 18 . 10/26/2013
Wow, that was gory! Nice description of the complex battle scenes; I could really see glimpses of so much happening all at once. In this chapter, as in the fanfic as a whole, I wish that there was slightly more transparency in characters: their mindset, thought processes, etc. Actions do speak louder than words, but don't forget the potential power of narration, either. Very passionate writing here. I can tell it was a labor of love.
SlenderMonkey chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
I like the brother-sister relationship between Harry and Hermione that's continued on from the books. But, about Harry being an Auror; I thought his grades were too low, and he didn't take the needed classes? Anyway, if the Ministry is short on personnel, and recovering from being gutted by Voldemort, I can understand how they'd widen their pool of candidates. Also, Harry Potter's fame and achievements have got to count for something.
SlenderMonkey chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
It's off to a good start; you've really set it up so that there's all sorts of things that might follow. Nice to have a glimpse of what a graduation might actually look like. I like that you acknowledge the year that this takes place canonically, too. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
lourds chapter 18 . 8/2/2013
I loved it... It was amazing!
Grace chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Good but little more detail
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