|Reviews for Materias|
| Oliviax3 chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
EEP! This piece was awesome (the title, the prompts, the writing) all of it was vivid, warm and lush. My favorite moments were "the moment was vast" and her dark skin against his.
Beautiful. Thank you.
| CantarellaKisses chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
This was really good. I liked the flow of the fic, the descriptions, and the settings. It was also a nice touch that you kept the dialogue to a minimum.
| nolongerpostingonthissite chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Very well done. I liked the way you jumped around in the timeline. It kept it interesting. Especially the history section.
| smartcheer917 chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
that was really good. i cant think of any areas that it could improve in.
| sangi chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
-has swooned and is naruto fangirl-
Haha, this is very nice :)
| akanekai chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
This was very well thought out, and it shows. You took a creative idea and turned it into something great. I like how you incorporated another character in the history section. It made the story more interesting.