Reviews for SWAT Kats: Kiss the Sky
Nightshroud chapter 2 . 11/25/2007
Good chapter! I was hoping you would update! I'm glad someone else besides me will write a ChancexCallie JakexFelina fic. Nicely done. Can't wait for the next chapter!
ulyferal chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Ah! My eyes. Crud! It's so difficult to read with my incredibly poor vision. Please for everyone's sake FIX THIS! This is really a great story and I'm enjoying it (just not enjoying trying to read it). Again...Proofread, use a spell checker. We'll enjoy this more when you don't post your first draft! Your finished, proofed, story would be much better...PLEASE! Such a great story should be treated better.
ulyferal chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
I have to agree with Nobility. This is a very good story but you really need to fix it and repost. All conversations need to be separated. Having the story bunch together like this is so difficult to read and follow. As I stress to the authors I help beta for: proofread...proofread...proofread. You just can't do it enough. It makes the difference between a fab story and a so so mess no one will stop to read. Please Fix This! Don't leave it postedl like this! Looking forward to second chapter but please don't do it like this.
KatrinaSebastian chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
i love it u got to write the 2nd ch please!
The Once and Future Thing chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
You really have something going for this story. Please continue on this, don't give up.
Razorslove chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
It was good for your first, but there were a few typos.

Keep up the good work, can't wait for the new chapter,

Update soon :3
Nightshroud chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
I like this story so far. Finally someone else who has a story with ChancexCallie and JakexFelina. I hope you update soon. Good job! _
Nobility chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
As the previous reviewer said, I was expecting this to be less than stellar, but this actually isn't too bad at all. Sometimes you don't finish your sentences with a period, and you could stand to do longer chapters. It's also a good idea to start a new paragraph everytime someone else speaks. Also, although you move a little too fast, your descriptions are good and quick without feeling too rushed. Also, your choice of pairings are very interesting, I don't think anyone else has tried RazorxFelina, which is surprising, and there isn't enough of T-BonexCallie out there. I'm keeping my eye on this baby.
Depths of Twilight chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
This is pretty good for your first fic. I see a few typos and there are some rough spots; mostly run-ons. Some of it seems a bit rushed, but I think SWAT Kats is supposed to be fast paced, ne?

All in all I wasn't expecting this quality from you, and I'm pleasantly surprised. I think I like your style better than Wolfe's (he tries to make his sound needlessly wordy and whatnot).
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