|Reviews for SWAT Kats: One more night here in your arms|
| Depths of Twilight chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
This is pretty good for your first fic. I see a few typos and there are some rough spots; mostly run-ons. Some of it seems a bit rushed, but I think SWAT Kats is supposed to be fast paced, ne?
All in all I wasn't expecting this quality from you, and I'm pleasantly surprised. I think I like your style better than Wolfe's (he tries to make his sound needlessly wordy and whatnot).