Reviews for Once more with feelings
Rosscan chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Super ! J'adore celle là aussi ! Elle est plus originale, un peu triste aussi, mais j'adore l'idée que ça n'a pas forcément marché du premier coup. Souvent dans les histoires c'est tout de suite parfait, mais pourquoi ça devrait l'être ? Bref, j'aime bien celle là aussi :)
LAIsobel chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Oh this was so ... sad and sweet and beautiful and it just got me all thinking and ... you know I think that something like this would have happened... maybe. It wouldn't be easy on them and they are just humans, they can make mistakes... but the important thing? They wanna try again and that is what makes them... well them :o)
dpdp chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Very nice.
Missing Linka chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
That was great ...

I've often wondered what would happen if they found out that they weren't as perfect together as they thought they would be ...

But I'm glad it turned out to be meant to be in the end ...

THX
TiaRat chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
I liked your story idea but the writing was awkward in some places. The point of view shifted around between "you", "I" and "him/her" as the subject and usually landed in second person ("you"), which is a very awkward way to write in English. If you changed it around to all be in either first person ("I" as either Jack or Sam)or third person ("he/she")it would probably read much more smoothly.

I checked your author page and I can see that English is not your first language. Please don't take the criticism too hard-I am not fluent in any other language and I think you are brave to post in English at all. If anything I said here doesn't make sense you are welcome to email me.
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
but she DID leave Jack for a younger man... for Shanahan. And for Faxon in the first version of reality. They'd had a commitment, however unspoken, to wait until they were free to love each other.