Reviews for Peach Girl: An Untold Tale
bleachdalilah chapter 19 . 3/18/2012
well, this story was VERY different from what I was expecting, but I love it anyways (: I might actually love it more than the other fanfics Ive read (: great job on this story over all (:
Gamer2008 chapter 19 . 10/12/2009
Please Continue! Aww, this story is so damn good!
bad and naughty chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Good so far.
meegees chapter 19 . 10/25/2008
i really like your story! keep writing more!
FreeFly629 chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
your writing is kinda choppy, and the text just goes dialogue...maybe you should add more discription.
NightmaresAtMidnight chapter 8 . 8/20/2008
Go Momo Sae really needs to be taught a lesson.
BellaLacey chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Cute Story!
Yami No Megami chapter 2 . 3/7/2008
I really dont like sae or touji...
For These Texts chapter 6 . 2/13/2008
REALLY good story! Can't wait 2 read ,more! _
ConnellKayuki chapter 6 . 2/9/2008
i like how you switch from one character to the other :)

s'a good story so far keep it up

i wanna see what Sae does
pink-kiss-candy chapter 6 . 1/22/2008
I can't wait to see what Sae has in store.
MSII chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
Yay! Someone that got thier facts straight! I keep seeing Kiley... it is KAIRI. It is KAIRI in the japanses version and it is Kairi in the english version! DAMN MORONS!

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Miss. Miyazawa chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
This was really good. I'm surprised and delighted at your wit. You perfectly narrated Momo's slight moodiness and Sae's conniving ways. Way to go! I'll have to read the next chapter to see what'll happen to our Peach Girl!

Respectfully,

Princess Miyazawa
pink-kiss-candy chapter 5 . 11/2/2007
I love this story!