|Reviews for Past and Present Situations|
| Darklycopene chapter 7 . 10/24/2013
I'm so surprised I haven't found this until now! This is a really good fanfic, and if the 113 (and now 114) reviews tell you anything, its that this story begs completion. Its so well written and in character. Please do update :)!
| Kasumy-Chan chapter 7 . 10/11/2013
Your writing style is something I never could get tired off. Its unique and detailed, yet you don't over describe. I really enjoyed all 7 chapters and I have to say your fantiction is one of the best I've ever read on this site. One of the best in every Fandom I'm in.
I like how mature and yet with their typical Charme (Gars jokester attire and Ravens seriousness) you describe the slowly blooming relationship between them.
There is so much emotion in every chapter. I swear I was always holding my breath at some points. The scene where gar got angry and yelled at her during the lunch scene. Amazing. The part in the bookstore. Breathtaking. I'm really happy that I found your fanfic. Its just so so good and amazingly written.
I'm really not good at writing reviews, i can't express how much i loved that story and how often I re-read it since I found it a few days ago. Since english is not my mothertongue I hope I didn't make too much mistakes in my review. I'm writing from my smartphone
I hope you will update soon and don't will need too much time for it. I'm really afraid after I saw your update and publish date. D:
It would be a waste if you wouldn't finish this amazing piece of awesomeness.
Love that story so incredibly much.
| Caprichoso chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
I'm not certain whether I've reviewed this or not, but if I haven't, it's certainly time. This tab has been sitting open on my computer through a few months, and even survived a trip out to the center of Siberia, where I now sit writing. Yeah, your story's that good.
Time is unfortunately at a premium for me right now, but I wanted to tell you that your use of language throughout this story has been masterful, and I've seen very few people who portray Gar and Raven in young adulthood as compellingly as you show them to us here. You've done a great job, and I look forward to reading more as time permits.
| Anna chapter 7 . 7/29/2013
| echosong258 chapter 7 . 7/29/2013
Interesting chapter. Man its been so long since you last updated, but I find the story plot very intriguing.
It makes me wonder about a lot of things. I wonder if Gar was simply upset because she 'used' his feelings for her to her advantage resulting in his loss, or if it was because she's able to easily converse with Robin. Perhaps both?
Regardless, your writing is still intriguing as ever. I'm glad you haven't given up on the story.
Update soon, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 7 . 7/29/2013
Hm. A much more serious chapter than expected. But also interesting in how it had the more sunny characters exposing a side of themselves that they so rarely show. Good work. :)
| titanfan45 chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
I was pleasantly suprised to see that you had posted today. This one was a bit dark. It looked as though they were about fall out in a major way since Beast Boy really did cross the line with his actions. Glad things worked out between them.
| xXimmortalXx chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
Ohhhhhh this story is wonderful!
| TheLurkingShadowWillow chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
Truthfully, I just love this story. It's so detailed and well planned and funny. It basically has all of the requirements for an awesome story. I can't believe I hadn't read it before. Shame. Another thing I favor is how you capture their personalities so well. Raven's wit, Robin's leadership and advice, Starfire's caring charisma, and Beast Boy's funny yet annoying affect on Raven.
Nothing to criticize here. Well, that'll be all.
| TheReaperGrimm chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
I l love this chapter and I love the tension between Raven and Beast Boy. I love the push and pull, give and take relationship you write so well. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Yuri Hannah chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
That was intense! Oh I'm much like Raven. I don't like change too. When I read this, I miss childish Beast Boy so much now.
| echosong258 chapter 6 . 5/1/2013
I hope you'll continue this fanfic. I would love to see where it goes :)
| Caprichoso chapter 6 . 12/24/2012
Ah, well, I don't suppose there's any chance of story necromancy here... it's a shame. Even though I like where your LoK story is going, this is a rare glimpse at something most authors on here can't write convincingly— adolescent BBRae.
Still, it's very well done.
| Caprichoso chapter 4 . 12/24/2012
I agree that Walt Whitman can go to hell, but that's more just for his transcendentalist BS and artificial simplicity like "ninth-month" instead of "September".
Another great chapter. Your turns of phrase are quite good, especially, "creating reason after reason to dislike him and then spoon feeding those reasons to whatever part of her went soft and stupid whenever he came around."
| Caprichoso chapter 3 . 12/24/2012
Just pausing to write a review before I take off for the next chapter, because I don't do that nearly often enough on stories that deserve it.
You have some great interactions here. It's easy to see how the childish bickering of the show could evolve into something more mature and, for lack of a better word, dangerous. Your characters are young adults now, and while Raven is resisting the change and Garfield is embracing it, neither can escape fully from the period they're in.
There are typos and such, certainly, but they don't interfere with understanding. Don't worry too much about them.
I'll keep reading now, but I just wanted to let you know that you have me hooked so far.