Reviews for Lingering
DarkenedPetals chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Aww thats so sad! Poor baralai!

good story though!
Miss Hydrangea chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Aww... I think you did well showing Baralai's conflicted feelings. Also, the moment where she withdraws her hand was very well-written.
Razer Athane chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Short and sweet. Nice.
zhaohuanshi chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
This is absolutely beautiful, extremely well written, and just captures emotion perfectly.
Songsa chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Aww, I loved this. This story was so bittersweet. I feel bad for poor Baralai.

Great job on this. I really enjoyed it.
Corrupt Innocence chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Sweet, sweet Yunalai lurve. *swoon*
ENTRIKIT chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Ohh, not many takes on that pairing. This was a good one. I liked how Baralai seemed to want to blame Shuyin for the feelings, but at the same time he knew they were his own. xD
Mandy I Am chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Very good take on that scene. It was a very bittersweet moment. Baralai's awkwardness and Yuna's discomfort were strongly felt. I enjoyed every bit of it!