Reviews for The Unholy Trinity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely update. I'll be interested to see how Filius' trip to the future affects the past now. And sucha bleak future it is. You've described it very well, and Minerva's courage in the face of death is much in character, as is her regret for how they treated Severus. Look forward to more soon. Well Done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, damn - no shagging, snogging, or snarking! Ah, me! LOL. Besides that, this was a great chapter - I hope that Filius does take their warnings seriously! And I can't believe that Albus and Filius manipulated Minerva - I can believe that Albus would, but Filius? Well, it was necessary... Anyway, great chapter, as always, and I look forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter! I absolutely loved it. I must admit, I was completely confused after the last chapter, but you tied in the whole time-space-travel matter very neatly, and now everything is crystal clear. :) I also had quite a good time imagining a drooping, coral Fawkes... poor fellow. Made me laugh nonetheless. Please update soon! I'm really loving this! (Oh, and one other thing... I loved the various nicknames for Voldy. Highly amusing. :P ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is *so* wonderful, and I can't wait for the next chapters to come out. I have hit one problem though. I've reached my limit on my knowledge of Indian clothing styles, and I'm going to have to do some digging to find out what a bindi is. Everything else I've gotten. I'm so looking forward to this story being finished so I can convert it to an ebook for rereading on my PDA so I can savor the details and complexity of the world-building and characterizations. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. So very witty. I'm pulling for the "happily ever after." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely incredible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY! What a fascinating chapter. I do really hope that you can update again soon. The portents were extremely well done. I like the idea of the alternate possibilities. Hurray for upcoming Umbridge torture! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story is brilliant - I like your portrayel of Flitwick, and his background is really interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa... I'm SO confused. I'll have to go back and read this later... but it's getting more and more interesting by the chapter! Update soon, please! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love you. Old and dying Minerva in THAT sari, and SOMEONE even took the trouble to include a jasmine flower... thank you so much! (BTW, anything you'd like to see in 'Folie' or 'Nothing like the Sun'?) And the whole vision scene was simply beautiful, so sad, but also proof of the beautiful friendship Minerva and Filius had... Great chapter. Hm, Sikh Tartan, wonder where that came from... hehe. All the references to the Hindu gods were great, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely continuation. You ahve really done a great job of creating these original characters and flashing out a very underused character in Filius. I love your recrafting of DH information to this new view of alternate futures. Look forward to more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Strange things are afoot at the Circle K. Very interesting visions. Can't wait to see what's next. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting-yes, I suspect Filius would be quite capable of killing Snape if he thought Severus was truly Dark (not to mention the little item of a stunning spell later on in someone's timeline). I do hope all this ends up better than Rowling had-although it has to. Minerva and Filius wouldn't let Snape rot in the Shack the way the Trio did. Thanks for updating. I'm more confused than ever, but then I suspect I'm right there with Goblin-Bey! (appropos of nothing at all-isn't a toad somehow involved in the creation of a basilisk?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool stuff. Well done Truly |