Reviews for Devil's Children
princessgraciesmummy chapter 5 . 4/13/2017
Started of good then just got stupid and crap toward the end
kellyainsley chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
Hahahahaha I'm dying after reading the second chapter. Thanks for clearing up that finding the panties and underwear meant he was cheating! When I read it I thought it meant that he was gay or a cross dresser and they were his hahahahahahaha
lyra hellsing meister chapter 5 . 3/13/2014
amanda konx means she devil in italin
21st Century Catalyst chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
I can beta read, if you still need one. Thanks

Amazing story.
Saphira93 chapter 6 . 8/10/2010
i like the story, but it don't get the change that happened. What happened to make bella change her name and make her so cold? and isn't alex her husband, not her slave?
Innocent2Deadly chapter 8 . 11/26/2009

So good!

Please update soon!
LouLouBear1213 chapter 8 . 7/7/2008
I know Bella's like super bitchy in this story but you can't help but feel bad for her. I mean Edward cheated on her with some no good vampire tart. I really really wish you would update please.
Andrazuria chapter 8 . 1/2/2008
wow this is really cool cant wait for the next chapter!
alicelover232 chapter 8 . 12/12/2007
please update
libra44 chapter 8 . 12/5/2007
it was great
IloveEdwardxx0 chapter 8 . 12/3/2007
love the story! update soon
bluwpandaz chapter 8 . 12/2/2007
more more...its so good!
blackjack17 chapter 8 . 12/2/2007
Can't wait for more to come. I wonder what Lucius needs from Edward.
TotalEclipseOfTheHeart2114 chapter 6 . 12/1/2007
You do know that Bella has brown hair not blonde, right?

Why call her Bella if you're going to make her completely different?
TotalEclipseOfTheHeart2114 chapter 1 . 12/1/2007

I think you should get a beta because your grammar isn't too good even thought the story is.

And also Stephenie Meyer's vampires don't have fangs, their teeth look normal, and Bella's eyes are brown not blue.
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