Reviews for Foxy Foxy
Pacman'd chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
ummm... MySpace wasn't in the 80s
XxMicky DolenzxX chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Very cool. Excellent poem.
Trollin Blue86 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
This is really great and all but what does this have to do with Sixteen Candels? LOL.
62442padfoot chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This was great. Very poetic
thesavorofpan chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I like it, but who wrote it and who is it too?
jAwbr3aker chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
i'm pretty sure myspace didn't exist during that time period...
TFAraujo7 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Hey I like it and i get the poem... I was just hoping to have some stuff about the characters [ ohh well it was a good poem either way ] ] ]
elizzib27 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
That was good.

Sixteen Candles is all about high-school drama, right?

So this poem is about that, right?

Don't listen to people who cut you down.

You're a great writer!
Luke Skywaxer chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Babe, you rock! I play the guitar a little, but my writing is what usually impresses the girls the most, at least i think that's it. so this is kind of like a song, right?
iloveromance chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Your poem is well-written and interesting, but I was hoping to read a story about the characters in the movie. This poem seems to be more about a guy talking about a girl that he's infatuated with.
Cloudburst2000 chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
It was a very good poem. I'm kinda guessing that it is perhaps referring to Caroline, Jake's girlfriend...the prom queen who was all into looks, popularity, and partying. That was my take on the poem, at least. Anyhoo, really good poem.
dracolover18 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
i'm a little curious...

HOW THE HELL IS THIS A SIXTEEN CANDLES FANFIC?
BackStabber22 chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
ok...i know everyone said this but...what the fuck does this have to do with sweetsixteen? i mean i luv the poem, big on the angst, but it has nothing to do with sweetsixteen whatsoever!
Bip-Bop-Boop chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
great poem, but how is it related to sixteen candles?
The Wordless Epoch chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
I agree ... Yeah, the main character was KIND OF vain, but that doesn't implicate anything. I actually liked the parts of the movie I saw ...

So, yeah, really- what does your poem, which was really good by itself as an original piece, have to do with Sixteen Candles?

The poem is powerful; I enjoyed reading it because I too get disgusted with people's myspace pics that are all, "OMG I'm so hot," when in reality they're fake. But ... Next time, might I suggest putting it on sister site, That's a site meant totally for original works and pieces, and has its own archive for original poetry.

Good luck!

Kat
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