|Reviews for What if?|
| Gynji chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
OK I wanna know how if they haven't seen him in 48 years he is now only 11 which means if that wasn't a mistake someone has cast some spell on him or he was somehow flung into the future!. Really great first chapter...now whre's chapter 2!.
| grey-eyed-goddess chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
TBC? Yes...Yes you will continue this wonderful little story. :D
| RingWarriorAzec2113 chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Hmm well there's one discrepancy. The boy is eleven and they haven't seen him for forty-eight years? *Raises eyebrow* Hope you can explian that one! _
Anyway this is good. Please update soon.
| mandylouise chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
I'm very intrigued thus far about this story, however there is one thing that I've found confusing. If Brian hasn't been seen by his parents for 48 years, how is it that he's starting Hogwarts as an 11-year-old? Other than that bit, looks like you've got an interesting story started, and I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
| Goddess McG chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
An excellent beginning to what seems to be the start of a wonderful tale. I'm looking forward to reading more about Brian's adventures and of how and if he finds out who his parents are. Well written and thay all seem very much in character. Please update soon.