Reviews for What if?
vangoghadmirer chapter 7 . 8/22/2007
Loved Dumbledore's comment that Brian has his crooked nose now. Another great chapter.
vangoghadmirer chapter 6 . 8/17/2007
Another good chapter. Do hope you update it soon.
dhawthorne chapter 6 . 8/17/2007
ooh...they're in trouble! Great chapter, as always! I can't wait to see what happens to them...please update soon!
vangoghadmirer chapter 5 . 8/14/2007
awe what a sweet gift he got her. Do update this one soon.
vangoghadmirer chapter 3 . 8/14/2007
I first read this story on the AlbusandMinerva yahoogroup, and reviewed there. Was waiting to see it get updated on there but when I checked this site I saw it was also posted on here and was thrilled there were more chapters beyond the three I read on that group. I must say it's an interesting concept and I look forward to see where you take it.
dhawthorne chapter 5 . 8/14/2007
such a fabulous chapter - I definitely think you're doing the MMAD ship justice!
dhawthorne chapter 4 . 8/14/2007
eww - cheez wiz! But other than that, the chapter was excellent! Please update soon!
RingWarriorAzec2113 chapter 3 . 8/3/2007
This is really good. Zoƫ sounds really cute! Hope to see her in later chapters.

Please update soon.
dhawthorne chapter 3 . 8/3/2007
this was a great chapter- poor Minerva, though! Great job, as always, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
dhawthorne chapter 2 . 8/1/2007
I really liked this chapter! Great idea having the squid help Brian out with the grindylows. Can't wait for the next chapter!
trulyamused chapter 2 . 8/1/2007
Not weird, cool. Brian and the Giant Squid a tale for the ages. (g)

Looking forward to more.

RingWarriorAzec2113 chapter 2 . 8/1/2007
Well this is good. I'd like see some of it from Brian's POV though. Especially his relationships with the animals. Giant squid in particular.

Please update soon.
TabbyKit chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
I love it! But, I'm a bit confused about the old is Brian? and When did they have him?
trulyamused chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Oh yes, do continue this is great. I love it.

dhawthorne chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
I am loving this story- what a great idea! I like how Brian was raised in America, as it gives him a certain charming aspect! Can't wait for the next chapter- please continue!
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