Reviews for Waiting
Aj Bradley chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
i loved it the story was so sweet if only there was more chapters...
gryffindor101 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
So, so glad I came across this fic. I absolutely LOVED it! Well done :)
JeanieBeanie33 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I loved this! Great job! I couldn't help but go aww at the first line.
Little Emily chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Aw, so unbelieveably cute xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
That-Golden-Snitch chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
I know you wrote this years ago, but procrastination has led me to my old favourite authors, you being one of them. Even though this fic was just small and silly, it made me a wee bit teary because it was so sweet. Well done!
007hannah chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
That was so adorable, and original! One thing: you should have divided the scenes when you switched from one to the other. Other than that, great job!
x-Falling-Stardust-x chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
aw! so cute! im so sad there isnt anymore! *weeps* great writing! xx
Potterworm chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
I just realized I never reviewed this story, even though I put it on my favorites list, and I just hate when people do that; so I figured I'd review properly now. I thought this was quite an enjoyable fluffy one-shot. It was easy to see Harry in Lily and James too, in the different things they did. (James taking Lily around the lake like Harry did with Ginny, etc.) The scene with Snape was perfectly written, and I particularly liked when Lily told Snape he had changed in response to his comment that people don't change. The ending was perfect, and I have to say, the three dots at the end (...)just about broke my heart, because while you didn't actually say it, it left the rest of their tale implied, what with Voldemort's attack. Once again, great job.
DOJ chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
I know I just reviewed your other story, but I thought I'd check out what out you'd written, and was pleasantly surprised by this - especially for your first Lily/James oneshot. It was very cute and very realistic.

And I'd just like to say that you have absolutely FANTASTIC taste in music.
La-Mer-De-Lune chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
EM chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
.GOD. * sniff sniff* that was so god...and sweet...and cute...and a little bit sad! i loved how u didnt make it all angsty and you know, Lily: I hate you, Potter, you are a *&%$%&*

and James being the idiotic boy: But i still love you, Lily. blah blah blah..

good work! The ending is just perfect!
5redroses chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
It's great how you managed to get so much into such a short space

: )

ijoihiugljyhgbv chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
that was realy sweet
SunshineDaisies816 chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Cute story. James was a chaser.
Ell chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
It was absolutly wonderful...except for one tiny little detail; wasnt Surius on the Quidditch team too?
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