Reviews for House of Burden
geminigrl11 chapter 19 . 1/6/2008
Woot! This is your standing O. :)

Full-circle, back to the loving Winchester unit, with Dean taking up for his little brother, not only with his parents, but with the evil doctor from when they were kids.

I love that Dean's met the ohter hunters (your Pastor Jim kicks ass), and that he's contemplating the idea of hunting alongside Sam.

Utterly fantastic AU that I shall be re-rading's just such a warm and fuzzy place. Thank you for sharing!
MDarKspIrIt chapter 20 . 1/5/2008
Awesome story! Hope there'll be a sequel...
keekers15 chapter 20 . 1/5/2008
awsome, i can't wait for the sequel:D ...there'll be one right? plz~! *is begging* lol, for some reason i didnt see this story ending quite like this, but dont ask me wut exactly i was expecting cuz i dont really know. but it was good all the same. happy new year to u too:D
Still Awesome2009 chapter 20 . 1/4/2008
great story, i smell a sequel
Mel chapter 20 . 1/4/2008
I just finished reading this fic. (btw it's almost 2:30am!) and I must say it's really awsome. I am wrecked to the bone now (it was worth it!) but I couldn't go without sending you a review to say that you did a really awsome job on this fic! So great work and :)

Lisette chapter 20 . 1/3/2008
Well done and congratulations on finishing this project! It was a wonderful look at an AU Supernatural - you gave us a whole new set of Sam and Dean that still, despite the changes, managed to retain the core parts of Sam and Dean. Almost overnight that wonderful brotherly bond was developed and strengthened.

My only complaint would be against the vagueness in Mary's mysterious phone conversation in the epilogue. It was TOO vague as I'm still left with many questions. Did she know about everything all along? Is she an accomplice with the darkness? Do we have our very own Judas in the Winchester camp? Who knows - maybe you left the conversation purposely vague to save yourself from committing to one side or the other until Kripke speaks. I, for one, continue to hold out hope that Mary was an innocent victim in the tragedy that befell her family. Oh, she obviously recognized the YED in the flashback, but I'm holding out hope that there's a very good, very innocent explanation for that - you know, that whole penchant the Winchester family has for making deals with the devil.

All in all, a very well done story. It was a delight to read, and here's to hoping that you pick up another lengthy project sometime in the near future.

Sensue chapter 20 . 1/3/2008
Wow. That was an amazing story. It was so detailed and just plain interesting. I read the entire thing in one go...truly I can't believe that I hadn't seen it before.

I loved that you added other hunters, such as Bobby and Pastor Jim.

I've decided to make this story Supernatural Fanfiction Award's Featured Story of the month. (I'll make you a banner and post it on the site; hopefully tomorrow!)
Hailsy chapter 20 . 1/3/2008
OMG! THAT WAS AWESOME! I was so scared Sam would never escape from the psych ward and that Dean and his family would never believe him but in the end they did!

Thanks for the fantastic story!

Savage Shade chapter 20 . 1/1/2008
That was great, I love that fact that you threw Mary knowing something in there. Highly enjoyable.
DreamShadows chapter 20 . 1/1/2008
Wow! I am totally in love with this story! I think before I leave, I'm going to read through this again... Or at least the brotherly and Limp moments, those were really fun!

...'being so darn cute.' - Aww! You think I'm cute? I bow to the queen and leader of the cats, but yay! I get to be cute!

Anyway, again I am so happy you chose my prompt in *cough**cough* June! You did a wonderful job portraying exactly what I felt and wanted for this fic!

Hugs you!

Take care and write often, see you on the board;

DS aka OSS
Annna92 chapter 20 . 1/1/2008
Great end!

This is one of the best AU stories I've ever read!

And I really hope you are planning on doing a sequel.
Moonfairyhime chapter 20 . 1/1/2008
Absolutely adored this story! I hope to see more from this 'verse!
Poaetpainter chapter 20 . 1/1/2008
I loved this fic, congrats on completing it!

Maybe a sequel?
Left Hook chapter 20 . 1/1/2008
yay happy new year NO WHYY are you ending there? That's not fair! Are you writing a sequel? I want to know about Mary and the demon!

Thanks for writing, I enjoyed it!
psiChic chapter 20 . 1/1/2008

That was, by far, the best AU story I've read here! I absolutely LOVE it. Seriously, very VERY well done, awesome cliff-hanger ending, emotional stuff dead on, brothers and secret-keeping mothers, and wonderfulness, LOL.

Two questions- One, is there a sequel? And two, if Mary knew about Azazel, why didn't she believe little Sam? *really really hopes for sequel*

Can't wait to read more from you. Awesome! :D
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