Reviews for Haunted Jaded Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story is so good want to see what happen when the children grow up |
![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() You’ve contradicted yourself so much during this story. Now you’re saying in this chapter that Harry hadn’t bought the Daily Prophet until they printed a story about his kids, but you had said that Harry already owned the Prophet in the chapter when Rita got arrested. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am confused as to why Poppy wasn’t aware that Harry was pregnant. In the previous chapter it said that Severus could’ve found out the gender early if he wanted by asking Poppy. So i’m just confused as to why you contradicted yourself by saying in this one that she wasn’t aware of the pregnancy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this might just be one of the best written stories I’ve read in a while |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck! This sounded so good until i realised its securus x Harry… how the fuck do people like thay shit? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my second time reading this. I adore the character growth in ron and severus the most. They both had the potential to be amazing (and thats saying something because i am rarely on ron weasleys side no matter the story). You made both of their best personalities shine through while still acknowledging the down sides. There are a few plot holes, but in a project this massive that is easy to do and negligable to understanding the story. One example would be the buying of the daily prophet twice (once to fire skeeter then again at the end) but i could have totally missed him welling it before the final show down. I enjoy that you have enough back story for non main characters to keel them interesting. I enjoy when authors flesh out the back stories but i know it can sometimes derail the plot bunnies and make it hard to finish a story. Anywho, i know thats a long review and prolly not all needed. You are a wonderful author and I enjoy the worlds you build, THANK YOU for all the work you put in and for sharing it with us |
![]() ![]() As loathe as I am to even think of such a thing...it might be a mercy for Ginny if the pain Dumbledor's commands cause her, coupled with the potential lingering toxicity of the potion itself, caused her to...well, to lose the baby. I know she and her parents would likely be relieved if that happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didt harry buy the prophet already? When skeeter printed the pic of him and bill hugging? Love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved how the contract backfired |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story is good and want to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() TIME F*ING BUBBLE |
![]() ![]() ![]() TIME BUBBLE why not use it |