Reviews for Human Contact
SmokeGetsInYourEyes chapter 10 . 5/29
Hey! Awesome story- I love how you made an augmented-angsty naruto without erasing the bright, goofiness that is what makes naruto naruto :) Well done! The feels are great haha

just one little thing, and I understand if this is annoying, you can ignore me if you like, but it was kinda bothering me how you sometimes write stuff like sasukes revelation that naruto's life had been harder than his... I think this is just...a little cruel to write, because you can't quantify pain, or put it on a scale like that. To sasuke his pain would have been all-encompassing, and to naruto, his pain would also be all-encompassing, and even though from the outside we can weight ones suffering and say one was more or less, actually feeling something is an entirely different story. I thing tragedies like going through torture/abuse, or losing the people you love, are fundamentally different kinds of pain, but more equal than you'd think. Sasuke may realize that Naruto has been in pain longer than he has, or has endured more punishment, less love...other less subjective stuff than simply 'pain', but Naruto has not (yet) had to walk through his home, stained with the blood of all the people he ever knew and loved, or had to watch them be killed on loop for hours while paralyzed and in pain. Most people in this story have been dealt a rough hand (Kakashi's back story, sheesh) so I...I dunno. Please be careful?

On another note, I kinda agree with you that Sasuke is pretty out of line sometimes with his...lack of empathy? I dunno- he's always a bit of a jerk. Love the guy, but he is as you put it, emo haha

Also Sakura empowerment, yay :) Love this! Sorry for writing your eyes away, hope this wasn't too irritating, I just...had a lot of thoughts haha. Happy Memorial day!
magicwand452 chapter 25 . 5/15
Absolutely amazing story. Too bad that it has clearly been abandoned, but I absolutely loved it.
Guest chapter 25 . 5/13
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Guest chapter 25 . 3/19
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Guest chapter 25 . 3/13
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Mr.Fallen chapter 25 . 3/12
You know every time you describe naruto's clothes i jush have to think of Mystogan and his outfit.
Mewsali chapter 17 . 10/14/2016
What would happen if Naruto used henges on his shadow clones and made them into fangirls without Sasuke knowing because traumatizing the Uchiha is fun? And the fangirls of fanfiction helped?
Mewsali chapter 16 . 10/14/2016
I thought the first lesson was to always show up late. And that within the hour was too early.
Mewsali chapter 13 . 10/13/2016
To the Great Fishcake Bridge! XD
wolfeshade6 chapter 25 . 10/5/2016
This story is wonderful! You had me hooked from the first sentence! I cant wait for you to update.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2016
Sakura did Carry them both in the anime
Jacob chapter 16 . 8/13/2016
Ashiteru for making this story
KuroNeko246 chapter 25 . 6/30/2016
I am in love with this story! You had me hooked from the first paragraph. I hope to see more of this story in the future.

You're writing is so clean too. Keep up the good work!
BankruptSamurai chapter 4 . 4/30/2016
So far, I like it. Even if Naruto's pretty close to his canon self you've managed to find a way - his "ultimate defense", if you will - to make it likeable. Plus, how can you not love a Naruto who's so damn similar to Rogue? Awesome, man.

Only nitpick is how Naruto repeatedly refers to Kakashi as "Kashi" and without any of the expected honorifics. I'll admit that "Kaka" and "Kaka-sensei" isn't much better in terms of nicknames, but at the very least it's familiar. Doesn't really matter, though. Still enjoying the story.
sharmahomanshu chapter 25 . 3/31/2016
Update please!?
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