|Reviews for Enslavement|
| vmage2 chapter 4 . 7/26
Whip, not wip. Whimpering, not wimpering.
| HiroJiyuNaka chapter 3 . 2/12
Referring to chapter 4:
'He quickly put on some clothes and answered the door only to see...' Hinata! Informing Naruto about a joint mission between Teams 7 and 8 tomorrow. And she somehow sees Ino, and it turns her on so bad to think of Naruto doing this, that she asks if maybe she could try whipping the slut. Perhaps under the reason that she wanted a little revenge on her for treating Naruto so badly?
OH!, or Shikamaru, asking Naruto if he knew where Ino was, since he knew Naruto and Ino had 'that stupid bet'. You could take this one any which way you wanted, whether Naruto lies and Shikamaru goes away, or whatever else.
There. Two free ideas! Please, they're a gift. Take one- heck, take 'em both! Use the other one some other time! Just please, please continue writing! I held up my end of the non-existent bargain, I've updated a bunch of stories, and I'm back into writing again! Now it's your turn. :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
this is boring as fuck
| the new guy1 chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
anyone know other fiction like this one if so please share thanks
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
More! Give us more
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/10/2014
i love the story so far but i wish u would wright the full story and put sakura as 1 of the slaves coz she is a bitch 2 naruto she needs a good fuck at the lest
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
I don't know if you asked or not but you need to at least give credit to LoveIs4Suckas cause this is just copy and paste just saying
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/9/2014
Update anytime soon?
| nekotenshihime chapter 4 . 5/16/2014
Nooo! How could you...what happened!
Who was at the door!
What a cliffhanger! It's not fair!
but thanks for the story anyway,
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/17/2014
god damn cliffhanger!
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
what next man?
| LordCanine chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
what's next man? go on continue it's a good story and it's just keeps getting better.
| XKhaosXKyuubiX chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
Is this fic being updated again?
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2013
It's great!i hope the next chapter comes soon can't wait
| mr grimjaw chapter 4 . 10/20/2013
who? who did he see up date quickly plesss this lemon was so hot!