Reviews for Where is he?
Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
A good combination between funny and cute :)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Wow good story!
PrntScrn chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Its not horrible but it does make me cringe with some of the dialogs, words and characterization.

but, I hope you will continue writing. D
Nox Counterspell chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
i love it!

at the begining i couldnt stop laughing, mainly when she says, "ni i just come to see if he was here..." at the end its charming
I Love Bleach chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
omg she fell in l-o-v-e
Sprinkle of Fanfic chapter 1 . 12/22/2008

That is ever so cute.


Keep it upp!
xnafraxd chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
gosh...that was cute! It gave me chills! :)
Dalandaaan chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Got it. Cool huh i luv de pairingz. )
Hikaru Takahashi chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
cuttie-shika chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
OMG:D Really sweet:D And the convo between Shika-kun's parents was hilarious:P
xnalu chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Hmm! Not bad for your first fic, but it lacks a large amount of imagery and description.

The dialog shouldn't be straight to the point and should be more interesting, too.

But otherwise, you're good to go. :]
Unices chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
oh this is good, but it could be funnier!
spriterx chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Very good story:)
SDF Macross chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I like it. They are my 2nd favorite couple in all of Anime (next to Naruto and Hinata)
12342212 chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
that was really nice! luved it!

-Chelle and Hina, sandgurlz
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