|Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons|
| charlottelmd61 chapter 1 . 6/6
what does the MM rape mean, is it male male rape?
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/13
Another master work! Thank you for sharing!
| PleaseDisregard chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
I don't know how you can classify this as Romance/Adventure. Severus is simply vile and Hermione is pathetic. I love this pairing, but the hypocrisy on Severus' part is just too overwhelming to take seriously. He is livid that Hermione is a "slut" while he whores around and tells her to just deal with it. Then he physically assaults one of his.. partners. On his wedding night. It is just baffling that he decides to court Hermione, but still goes to one of his women. I guess the Romance part was when he moaned out Hermione's name? I that if Hermione is stupid enough to sleep with him that she makes him go through some sort of STD testing at least. And that she makes him grovel, a lot. But... seeing as she's already apologized to him for no damn reason, I have a feeling that she'll be madly in love with Snape by the beginning of the next chapter.
| aganioq chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
Hi, I really like it, just like most Your stories. But I have a question, is it whole story, or maybe sth was cut. And if it's not where can I read it?
| Severus chapter 4 . 12/30/2015
Pls write the sequel:)
| CoralPotion chapter 4 . 5/8/2015
Find me on this I'm an author but not signed in-
That was amazing! I knew they could do it! Voldemort really was a sick fuck wasn't he!
Amazing thank you so much! Xxx
| Angelus chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
This is not the full version of this story however your site isn't user friendly. I came across a story of yours on fan fiction which wasn't too bad, so I decided to access your site. Reading the full version of this story brought me to tears, as I'm sure it has others, that was probably your intention.I'm not ashamed to say that after reading that savage rape scene something inside me died. Not only have you 'raped' a woman's rights and tossed the normal reaction to such an atrocity aside, your attempt to right the damage you have inflicted by that filth, is have destroyed Severus and Hermione, the very pairing you claim to love, out of what? curiosity at how far you could push 'your' characters. This story is not dark, its evil, as are imagination is disgusting, one wonders what kind of a person can right this and be happy to then show it to the world. You should stop writing and spreading your filth,I also suggest occupational therapy, although from the way you write,I doubt even that would help you
| alizeta chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
I think it'll be the last fanfic I read from you, I read them all. I really wish I had time to translate them into French, you would have more readers, you really worth it. You have already Asaelys, whose translations led me to know your universe, and I think if you add them on your personnal website it would reach a larger numbers of readers.
I don't understand: I was on my way to add this comment on your website, when a "404 Error Page Not Found" starded a one-sided conversation with me, trying to get my compassion for it, instead of just processing what I actually asked. Which spell have you put on this poor server in order to have him make such a fool of itself? You should definately got residuals for it because it makes troubles with computers more enjoyable.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/16/2015
WHY? WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? I HAVE STAYED AWAKE FOR 5 HOURS TO COME TO THIS CONLUSION? OH DEAR GOD! WHY?
| Unknown Reader chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
Your fanfic is really one of the best I've ever read.
I often read your fanfictions and I enjoy it everytime.
I have discovered you thanks to the work of Aesalys who translate your fanfictions in French.
Thank you so much for this artwork !
The Unknown Reader
P.S. I really really love Severus' nickname as a "sex god" !
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/18/2014
I LOVE YOU! I Stumbled across one of your writings and I loud the way you think! I will always read anything you write! I swear please write more.. I need your mind and soul️
| talenkarr chapter 4 . 11/16/2013
I think this is the first time the ending actully fit for me. I seiously doubt that the death eaters would ever stop. they might be glad that loon was gone but they would not stop hating and not stop the violence.
| Hungry-elf chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
When I first saw this fic, and the warnings that were on it... I was unsure about it. I didn't think I'd enjoy it at all. But once I started reading it, I could not stop. It was an absolutely perfect story. Perfectly written, with such a wonderful story line. It was just amazing. Well done.
| shayek217 chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
that was soo good you should totally do a sequel on like them getting all the death eaters and then starting a family or something :)
| bingohandjob chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
What a terrific story! Well planned, exquisitely and teasingly paced. I am in awe of your talents, Ms Figg.