Reviews for Shallow
Kitty Jinxter chapter 16 . 11/6/2010
That was freakin awesome.

That story just made my freakin week. I thank you.

But I kinda wonder why Cloud's lastt name was Faire in the last chapter. Was he related to Zack?

Anyway, awesome story!
Jmage-fic chapter 16 . 12/19/2009
Yay! Finished~

Loved it! Really did, twas bloody awesome.
HellzCrusader chapter 14 . 10/26/2009
NO T_T cliffies, why did it have to be cliffies! :P im weird oh well. great job and i simply cannot wait for another update :D
HellzCrusader chapter 13 . 8/10/2009
more please! its been a while since you updated and i would love to see more.
May All Your Bacon Burn chapter 13 . 2/15/2009
*dies* NO! I hate cliff-hangers and stuff, grr. But I'm glad you write more! I'm looking forward to the next update! Hopefully Cloud'll swoop in and save our lovable Axel from harm

Toons chapter 11 . 5/22/2008
Yay! Can't wait to

GO CLOUD! (It's weird seeing Cid abusive though... lol not hard to imagine... just weird) :D
Noctuae chapter 11 . 5/20/2008
There was an angst and sappy cloud and it rained all over this chapter.

I love it.

Elichi chapter 11 . 5/20/2008

Ulti-sama! You compose the BEST chaptas EVA!

Like for cereal!

Everyone knows they're jealous cuz I always have the best chapters dedicated to me. (Jus Kiddin... but not really.)


You mega own Ulti! I shall aim to someday be as awesome as you... Marry me?

DragonRider-Xankira chapter 10 . 5/12/2008
O.M.G. So eventful! I officially
Noctuae chapter 10 . 5/10/2008

You updated!

Fisheh be happy now.

Elichi chapter 10 . 5/9/2008

This chapter was so awesome, it left me at a loss for words "sjod f lsjdof"
Kokotake chapter 9 . 3/16/2008
This is very good so far! This has my four favorite characters in it, Axel, Cloud, Reno and Vincent! Hehe. Wonder what'll happen next!

It would be awesome if you kept writing! Poor Axel.
Elichi chapter 9 . 3/8/2008
Gah, I finally get around to reading and reviewing your story.


-Does a little dance- Axel and Cloud kissededed! -Jumps for joy-

So hot!

Welp, this was an awesome chappy, very short -tear-, but awesome nonetheless.

Can't wait for the next!

Noctuae chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
OMG, Ulti!

Long time no talk.

You've finally updated, still can't believe no one reviews.

Ugh, stupid lazy people. I mean come on, its a CloudXAxel for crying out loud, who can say no to that?

Nitane-sama's been...grounded. So I wouldn't count on hearing from her anytime soon.

:Oggles at the kissing:

This pairing will never get old regardless how rare someone writes it.
Elichi chapter 8 . 11/27/2007
*Squeals* A chapter just for me? If my chest isn't just swelling with barely suppressed surprised love! (can you say over actor? XD )

Blah. You said bomb. *snickers*

I think that's the first time I've seen you say bomb.

*tears* It makes me proud to think that I'm rubbing off on my dear hero Ulti.



Hahaha. Riku and Fuu? Teehee that couple makes me laugh. I just keep thinking of her shouting her simplistic responses at Riku.

Anywho how could I possibly hate you for an awesome chapter such as this? Blasphemy I say!

Awesome job as always and I cannot wait for you to post the next chapter to this story!


P.S. Our story shall be bomby!
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