This is really good i love this theme for the story good job hopefully update soon

you should continue the story it is so me most stories don't catch my attention easily! - Please continue it! Or better please try to finish it if you have the time.

I love this story! You have got to update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next, its such a interesting and unique story. Do continue it soon, I Cant Wait!

This story is so good! i love these kind of AUs. The challenge really had me doki doki doki doki, so nervous DX poor Fai, he must have been so terrified. The part in the cave was awesome, LOL at Kuro being drawn in by Fai's siren attack (lololol). I loved it. The part where Kuro was sort of blind and walking on water was amazing, as was the glowing stones, it was harder than I thought it'd be and so suspenseful. I'm so sad they were separated from the children, that must be so hard on Fai... update soon pretty please!

AW! Nice chapter! You made me want to learn Elven.

I thought that was Elvish Fay was speaking. It just...sounded like it. I don't know. It felt like it. ...I'm gunna stop now. Yes, I'm a Tolkien fangirl *cough* Legolas *cough* I love how you wound that into your story. It's the perfect language to cast spells in in my opinion. Keep it up. Aka, update ASAP! ;)

lol that's okay a lot happened... and I have met someone who can speak elvish... fluently... I have a knife collection *shrugs* to each their own :}

haha! we all have obessions my dear, it's just the matter of whether we want to show it or not. XD The words though did seem very mystical as Kurogane pointed out. I think that Touya is putting more pressure on them then necessary. Good chapter! can't wait for the next one! _

-TrueDespairOverlord

Cliffhanger! I'm interested in what these challenges are!

I don't care that it was short. Why? Because YOU UPDATED! I about leapt out of my chair when I saw this. It made me so happy. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was beginning to think you'd left it for good. *hugs you* Thanks bunches. Now, update again. ASAP! ;)

Touya never did like the traveling group did he...

Man! Kurogane and Fai never get a break do they? when you think they got out of one thing they get landed in another! I hope things work out for them. Nice chapter! _

-TrueDespairOverlord

oh no! *GASPS* *hyperventilates* there aren't any more chapters... (sobs softly and then passes out from lack of air) (giggle)

horrors! if I ever caught my parents... *shudders* ... (giggle)

NO! Kurogane! :- [