|Reviews for Larceny, Lechery, and Luna Lovegood!|
| Wyrd42 chapter 21 . 11/28/2013
Yes, the geek will inherit the Earth... or at least get petty vengeance with their newfound power.
| Wyrd42 chapter 15 . 11/28/2013
I find myself enjoying the accidental harem of Ron the not-a-dark-lord. I've seen plenty of Harry Potter harem fics, and two of the things most of them have in common is that it's Harry who gets the harem and there is much Ron bashing. I much prefer Ron as being immature and inexperienced in social matters than the giant prick many people make him out to be-and not that kind of prick. Get your mind out of the gutter. Looking at his background, he seems to have had very little interaction with non family before going to Hogwarts, and as a result he treats his friends as being family, for better or worse(often worse).
| Wyrd42 chapter 12 . 11/27/2013
Orgasmo was a horrible, horrible, and thoroughly entertaining movie. The parallels with Ron's circumstances had not escaped me; good to know they were intentional.
| Wyrd42 chapter 10 . 11/27/2013
Under most circumstances, I find rape of any kind to be at best repulsive and disgusting, even when happening to someone thoroughly deserving, and even worse when used humourously.. It seems that death eaters being humped by randy dragons has sufficiently bypassed my normal reaction and had me giggling.
| Cemalidor chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
Ouch, THAT i call an Assault. :XD
| doubledamn chapter 52 . 11/18/2013
What do you have against Dean?
| arunendu chapter 83 . 11/16/2013
It was quite funny how ron agreed to become dark lord to impress fred becoming minister is quite write more stories.
| doubledamn chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
Did I spot a Discworld reference? I hope so.
One of the most popular songs on the Disc, number 2 in fact right after "A Wizard's Staff has a Knob on the End" is the country hit "The Hedgehog Can Never be Buggered at All"
| Lanity chapter 63 . 11/5/2013
Love the Tombstone reference.
| TheWrittenSorcerer chapter 8 . 9/14/2013
Nice reference to Make a Wish. Loved it.
| TheWrittenSorcerer chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I absolutely love the book titles in your stories. They are amazingly concise and hilarious.
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
So are Harry and Hermione getting it on or what? It's not clear. Again, your prose is full of dialogue but not enough description and interaction with the environment.
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 12 . 9/12/2013
LOL! I love the Ron Jeremy idea. And the "dark lord by accident" plot line with Ron is brilliance.
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 10 . 9/12/2013
The one thing I don't understand is Harry and Hermoine's slide into theft. Seems a bit... out of the blue "oh hey lets steal stuff now". In the books they're portrayed differently.
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 9 . 9/12/2013
So what I'm noticing so far with your writing style is that you exclusively focus on the dialogue of the characters. They don't interact with their environment, nor does the environment interact with them.
I highly suggest a reading a good book on editing such as "Self-Editing For Fiction Writers Second Edition: How to Edit Yourself Into Print [Paperback]
Renni Browne (Author) ".
Your plot and dialogue are good, but your writing in this needs more meat.