|Reviews for Attempt Twenty Four|
| SunshineDaisies816 chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Hahahahhahahahaha! That was great! I loved it!
| Giun chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Is that the end, or is there a sequel?
| OnTheVergeOfExtinction chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I didn't even think of the slide till it appeared! I liked the way the Marauders interacted with each other, it seemed more natural than in most fics. All in all, a good oneshot!
| another stars hollow freak chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
haha this kept me laughing the whole time! so veryy funny. i think you should write a little one-shot sequel, maybe when Lily does something to get james? or when a plan finally works for him to get her.
| Rouche99 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
That was HILARIOUS! My mom even liked it! Great job!
| ajteel0203 chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Funny defeniteley. :)
| xLilyFlower28 chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
it was cute.
and it was extremely relieving for you to refer to James as the chaser.
every time i read a fanfiction where it says James is seeker, a little part of me dies.
| Jessica chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
it was really good. do you have any other stories?
| weisi chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
OMG I LOVE IT!
OOH heres ur first interview question (remember me when you become a famous writer) (oh i'll be at your book signing dont worry):
and what color writer are you, ms rawry?
AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA i couldnt stop laughing when he slid down the stairs! wow ur a freaking genius smart writer person.
GOSH save some talent for the rest of us!
| leahmarie 023 chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
ahaha it was hilarious!
| The Mighty D chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
All in all a pretty entertainig read. I like the banter between the Marauders and you do a good job capturing the chemisty between James and Lilly. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see where this goes next? Romance at Hogwarts is never a boring thing to read!