Reviews for My Gilded Life
Mimikkyu chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
Well i've just finished the 3rd chapter and this looks promising. Wondering if dumbles is a manipulating sob or not...
Ashen-Shugar chapter 8 . 6/14/2014

I have to stop reading it at this chapter.

I don't know if you're Mormon or not, and frankly I don't care.

I'll do the hand-wave on belief on his pushing the drinking coffee, tea, and other crap on a family who didn't believe it from the start who instantly takes it for face value, despite the fact that previously Lockhart told them not to take people at face value. Ok. Fine.

We'll even assume that there's sound founding belief in religious texts that state that, specifically as the lines you quote are NOT in the King James Bible. Ok. Fine.

But in this very same chapter, that you begruge them for drinking coffee and tea, you find it ok to drink (let's say it together) potions... which is a brewing of herbs, organic materials, and other-worldly combinations. Hypocrite much?

Then of course, for someone who has such religious ferver, to basically practice magic and witchcraft, which is also against religious doctorine, let alone murder which others mentiond...

yea... sorry, I just can't read this anymore. You've gone over the line, dived over the cliff, and went into the great beyond on contrived.
tanithlipsky chapter 14 . 5/24/2014
Slutmonkey Radishballs chapter 7 . 5/5/2014
It's OK to murder the Dursley family, but it's NOT ok to drink tea? Really, this is an amazing example of the kind of magical thinking you extremists have about your religions. What about the commandment THOU SHALT NOT KILL? Ugh. Talk about plot holes. And you started so well, too.
Veedramon chapter 14 . 4/29/2014
Well, I guess this is the end.
Veedramon chapter 13 . 4/29/2014
Okay, too many wifes are bad...
Veedramon chapter 12 . 4/29/2014
You are contradicting yourself, first you say that marring too young is wrong, then you say that is better to marry as young as possible. Besides that, I agree with the rest of the talk.
Veedramon chapter 11 . 4/29/2014
What, the spell works? Damn, this is insane...
Veedramon chapter 10 . 4/29/2014
I love the insanity, have you written any Adams fic?
Veedramon chapter 9 . 4/29/2014
The whole Gomez thing was hilarious, Actually is a bit sad there aren't more Harry Potter/Adams family crossovers around... why don't you give it a try?
Veedramon chapter 8 . 4/29/2014
Honestly, a lot of people hate Snape, and a lot of people would, if not killed those abusers, at least make them suffer. I agree that killing those "Dumbseys" was the best option he had at the moment.
Veedramon chapter 7 . 4/29/2014
Well, he is at least now a wizard, not an overly powerful one, but at least he know has some skill.
Veedramon chapter 6 . 4/29/2014
You forgot the part where Lockheart saved a lot of people in the magical hospital, that's a very important event. Well, I am okay with the way you are handling it so far, he has several deficiencies in what he knows for example,
Veedramon chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
Okay, so you could in theory, create a small elite force using harry blood, as long as they where compatible and you knew the right spells?
Veedramon chapter 4 . 4/29/2014
I bet he will use the stone to bribe Flamel.
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