That's a pretty good poem. I enjoyed it. One thing, though- you often use 'your' when you should use 'you're' Other than that, good job!

I love it. It's Pansy alright, I like how you lifted her up while yet putting her down.

Your story is very well written, there is no doubt about that! However, I am a Pansy fan and I must let you know that the books are through Harrys eyes - he insults Pansy because she is his rivals girlfriend. JK Rowling hated the character Pansy because of her past, there is more to her than meets the eye.

I'm not too much of a fan of poems, but yours is nice )

this is really really good! and honest ]] i hate Pansy too ]]]

luv ya

-xcharmedonfirex

Its a good poem and has a great rhythem to it. But from what i know, pansy isn;t supposed to be that slim at all. but ( even though i have to admit that i am a big fan of pansy) i really like this.

This is really good. It doesn't just state what Pansy is, its what some girls I know are too. It has a very nice rythm to it.