|Reviews for Eviscerated|
| zeroichi chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
omg omg aaahhhh! this is soooo deep man! i cant help myself from shuddering everytime u mention about dean's stomach. that is so wrong on every level.. no offence :))
n the surgery... aahh that is sooo painful! *shudded shudder* anyway.. this is nice! :))
| PokeyDotes chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
I have to say that you have a talent. Even with something as strange as mpreg, you manage to capture the boys and their characteristics. I can honestly see them reacting this way. And from someone who's had family members suffer from postpartum, you did an amazing job capturing the emotions and ramifications. You should definitely be proud of this. I only just discovered your stories, but I'm definitely going to read all three of your spn.
| badaiwind chapter 6 . 12/23/2010
Sorry for taking such a long time to leave a review.
I REALLY LOVE this fic.*hugs*
Thank you for posting this here. :)
| Dizzo chapter 6 . 6/17/2010
Amazing, I loved it!
| TheKritty chapter 6 . 12/8/2009
Okay, here is the thing: I'm not one of the wincest shipper and read wincest just a few times in a month, sometimes not for many months, because I like just some and I'm choosy like that. And I'm certainly not into mpreg - BUT somehow I found this story because I was looking for some pretty hurt!Dean. And you know what? I LOVED this story! Maybe it was also the fact, that it wasn't a typical mpreg - not with any real making-love and having a real normal baby in the stomach *lol* It was something evil and supernatural and there wasn't any pretending of the pregnancy being normal or so - so I enjoyed reading all this and was squeeing when there was some brother-interaction SO full of brotherly love (and for those who wanted a little bit more than that, but for me, it was just overprotective and VERY intense love of brothers *lol*).
I also loved the fact that it wasn't over after the surgery - the whole depression thing was one helluva hurt!Dean-thingy!I love Dean being depressed and hurting and shaken and broken - which is just an evil thing to say but we all know that all fangirls are pure evil, right?
You have a great writing style, there is always a balance of all things - not too much hurt!dean to be unauthentic and not too less, not too much cheesyness but the fitting amount of schmoopy-ness!
I loveloveloved it!
Greetings from Germany!
| drkstormynite chapter 6 . 9/2/2008
Wow, powerful story. You did a great job, poor Sammy, poor Dean. Love when the brothers are there for each other, their love and strength are amazing.
Thanks for a great read, can't wait to read more of your fics!
| Shifting chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Wow, that was really something. Haven't read one that riveting or disturbing in a long time. It's good to see the brothers distanced every once in a while, not constantly wanting each other around like a lot of people write them. That's probably not the kind of comment you would want to hear, but hey, thanks for putting the effort into writing such a great fic!
| V.R. Jennings chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
Loved it! It's very good and well written. Keep it up!
| obaona chapter 6 . 6/21/2008
... Wow. You know, I kind of define crack!fic in my head as something with a cute but totally unbelievable premise, that makes no attempt at being very believable.
But this! THIS is believable. Going along every part with meaningful detail, showing us how it could be - yeah, that's believable, all right. ;) Anyway, I really enjoyed this - some parts of it were horrific, but the characterization shown through, the boys' strength shone through. Oddly enough, it really made me think about just how strong they are, dealing with all the crap they do and still going on. Your characterization fits in with my feeling of the show seamlessly.
Really well done fic. Thank you for writing!
| Mangacat201 chapter 6 . 5/27/2008
Mean.. really mean one! And there I went and complained about Limp!Sam.. wasn't even near the anguish over the whole Hurt!Dean fraction, eh? Those were one hell of an unhappy puppy, I mean, vicious creatures, but I wouldn't have expected it to turn out like that. anyway the description of the emotional turmoil in the aftermath really got me!
| Rose chapter 6 . 5/26/2008
PERFECT. Loved it! _
| Stoneage Woman chapter 6 . 5/7/2008
Wow. You dreamed this? That's seriously disturbing. And the whole demon pregnancy thing also took some getting used to. And Post Patrum Depression? I would NEVER have seen that coming. But it was a really good fic. I loved the way you portrayed the brothers' relationship. You write really well.
| lucablue chapter 6 . 5/4/2008
Well I was lucky enough to be able to read this all in one go, having found it so late, and it was awesome!
Loved the angst - am a sucker for hurt Dean and protective Sammy and you wrote both beautifully.
Great story - well done!
| Phyllis L. Loafman chapter 6 . 4/11/2008
First, let me say...God, I'm glad this is over...what a ride.
I really need to go back and read in it all at one sitting, but I totally enjoyed this...even the really hard parts to read. I think more than the actual injury and surgery, the depression that Dean suffered and the confusion as to the reason for that emotion was the hardest thing to read. He...and Sam...were at such a loss.
Awesome ending. It felt right...like Dean needed to know that he was still 'Dean' still a hunter in order to move forward.
I was in Canada when this last part was posted and have been looking for it for 2 days after deleting the original notification from my email. It would have helped a lot if I could accurately spelled Eviscerated (and yes, I am looking at the title as I type). LOL
Again, I hated to see it end, but man what a ride.
| HAP chapter 6 . 4/11/2008
Wonderful! I'm glad you decided to sort those boys out and leave them getting on with their hunting. I liked the vivid description of the fight at the beginning of the chapter - I was wincing along with Sam and Jim when they saw that Dean had ripped his incision. Ouch!
Great fic - I really enjoyed reading.