Reviews for Alice
jagadeesanenator chapter 3 . 8/27/2007
Thta rverend is retarded!
Canadian Bookworm chapter 3 . 8/27/2007
wow that was great!

this is gonna sound kind of weird, but i like your the where you put the paragraph breaks. it just makes it a lot more pleasent to read than a giant blob, or huge monologues or disjointed double-spacing. so yeah. the story's great too, obviously, but hey, little things make all the differnce! And thanks for correct spelling and grammar too. can't tell you how HAPPY that makes me!
pixieandsoldier chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
IT'S SO GOOD I LOVE IT please keep writing there aren't enough good Alice stories out there

La-Garce-Fille chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
Update soon plz.

-LGF ;)
jagadeesanenator chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
THis is a great story but why does she say her vision out loud?
Canadian Bookworm chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
wow...i really like it! please, please continue!
jagadeesanenator chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I like this story! I cant wait to see what happens next
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