|Reviews for Alice|
| jagadeesanenator chapter 3 . 8/27/2007
Thta rverend is retarded!
| Canadian Bookworm chapter 3 . 8/27/2007
wow that was great!
this is gonna sound kind of weird, but i like your spacing...like the where you put the paragraph breaks. it just makes it a lot more pleasent to read than a giant blob, or huge monologues or disjointed double-spacing. so yeah. the story's great too, obviously, but hey, little things make all the differnce! And thanks for correct spelling and grammar too. can't tell you how HAPPY that makes me!
| pixieandsoldier chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
IT'S SO GOOD I LOVE IT please keep writing there aren't enough good Alice stories out there
| La-Garce-Fille chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
Update soon plz.
| jagadeesanenator chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
THis is a great story but why does she say her vision out loud?
| Canadian Bookworm chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
wow...i really like it! please, please continue!
| jagadeesanenator chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I like this story! I cant wait to see what happens next