|Reviews for Coalescing|
| riversrunthroughme chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
Ahh, lovely Yondaime musings. They make me happy. I got into this fic very easily, peaked interest right away and held it the entire way through, which is an accomplishment given my attention span. You're very deft with your words and what lovely words they are, very nicely put together and such. The whole 'boy-who-will-be-great' shtick is more than kind of awesome and I love how it slowly evolves toward the end of the story. Props.
Favorite scene...definitely the 'My justu just saved our ass scene' and the 'You can summon monkies?' bit. Yummy. Goofily grinning geniuses with absurd hair are hot and this fic makes at least one of them glow. Great job. Laterz!
| alescA Munroe chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Much love for your characterization of Yondaime-sama. The bit with Jiraiya, and then the part with the snow, those have to be my favorite parts. Write more with Yondaime-sama, hm?