Reviews for For Lack of Better Words
Spacy-Book-Nerd chapter 5 . 11/27/2007
hey they reminds me of Bella and how she always refers to her Jacob as her sun well its like before she meets Jacob before he could push away the clouds
israeli-american chapter 4 . 10/12/2007
You have a real talent...I write poetry,too, but its not half as beautiful and touching as yours.

I really like all the analogies...

mrs.cullen22 chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
loved it. great job
Zukaddy chapter 4 . 9/16/2007
i love this last one. my faves are the first and last ones. the 2nd makes no sense to me, but its funny... and the Esme one is beautiful. you're a great poet.
Zukaddy chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
wow. thats amazing. it really captures what happens... fantastic
WishICouldDeleteMyAccount chapter 4 . 9/16/2007
Amazing. Really brilliant. Wonderful job. Keep it up. A favorite. :)
let-words-free-you chapter 2 . 8/28/2007
You are ( I think) comparing love to madness? Run from love, or it will drive you mad. Lunatic Lane is a play on Lovers Lane, right? But nice. Very nice.
WishICouldDeleteMyAccount chapter 3 . 8/3/2007
WishICouldDeleteMyAccount chapter 2 . 8/2/2007
Really well written... my poem i wrote is okay, but like i said in the summary one of my lines is kind of forced... very good _.