|Reviews for Fishing|
| bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I'm not sure I like this, only because I have a problem with how…violent? Animalistic? Predatory? Heidi was. I know this was the point, that the Volturi are like this, but it's kind of disturbing to actually read it in their point of view.
Other than that, it was great writing. I could really see inside her head, no matter how much I wanted to yell at her. Especially for that last line, no matter how true it was at the time in the series, considering he wasn't planning on changing her.
| pgrabinEdward chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Wow! Great charater, so devious :)
| BeBrezzy chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
interesting pov, i liked it.
| Josie Shane chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
That was excellent... I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for the glimpse into Heidi's mind.
And as always... thanks for sharing!
| BraveRadin chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
hmm. Heidi is most interesting. Anyway, good job luv it luv it luv it etc!
| KristyRose chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I love that you described the mechanics of the room. ..as sick as its purpose is. LOVED the lines at the end "playing with food", "dinner and a date".
Thanks for entertaining me while I couldn't sleep. I've been reading a few of your stories. ...And shall read more when I can not sleep again. ...probably tomorrow.
| Goddess-Divine-05 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Amazing to read what the Volturi thought of all this. lol
| AColdAndBrokenHallelujah chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Heidi is very unsympathetic. It's kinda funny how she thinks. I liked this:)
| sintRizzie chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
i like it! :D haha
| InkHeart17 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Oh this was cool! Great new perspective from Heidi. Do you know where I can find other stories of this challenge?
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
wow shes mean.
| scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Nice job. For what little we know about Heidi, I think you portrayed her well.
| mrs edward masen cullen chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
the first word that came to my mind at that last sentance was 'bitch'
| Sorceress Jade chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
We, that was fun. Of course she'd lust after Edward, hah.
| MintCcIceCream chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I like how you don't realize who it is until the end. While I was reading it I thought it was like felix or another guy until Demitri spoke to her. Anyway good job on the story and good luck with other writing!