Reviews for A Better Man Than I
isabelle1983 chapter 1 . 1/6
I know it's been almost a decade later, but I stumbled upon your story yesterday (was new to the whole GA scene and I binged over the Holidays and I was looking for some MerMark stories, considering I'm no fan of Derek) and honestly, it's one of my favorite. Your writing is absolutely flawless. You convey emotions like no other. I was rooting for a MerMark pairing and I'm glad I'm not the only one. I know your other stories are not finished and you may have no intention to do so, especially 10 years later, but if ever you do find the time and the desire to finish them, you'll have a devoted fan following you.
viki2233 chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Mark and Meredith are a great pairing.
MOH82711 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This was amazing! I love Mer/Mark too but not as much as MerDer :)I just wanted to say one thing that I'm not sure you know but I do cause I have litterly watched all the episodes 100 times but at the season 3 finale Derek was chosen as the new Chei but told Richard that he wasn't done being cheif...
iamkellylouise chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
D.

can't think of any words for how good this is!
TVHollywoodDiva chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
LOVE THIS
CitronPresse chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
That is really so very good and beautifully written. Brilliant idea showing it all through Derek's POV. All the details of Mer and Mark's intimacy are wonderful.

So, Derek got Chief but lost Meredith. But, at any rate, it seems liked he's learned something and grown in this story! And, I love the closing line "Logic over emotion. He was a neurosurgeon for a reason; cardiology was too painful."
N chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
WoW! You just made me a convert to the MerMark ship.
Advo chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
So good! Thanks! I love Mar/Mer fics, he's one of my favourites on the show. I have always thought he was perfect for Mer and you're proving me right.
chocolateluver14 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
That was wonderful. I especially liked the last line:

"He was a neurosurgeon for a reason; cardiology was too painful."

You did a great job of narrating from Derek's point of view, and the way you wrote Mark was lovely.

Great work.
Libranfate chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
That was excellent...amazing even! Your talent level is absolutely off the charts! Truly outstanding work!
Bella-mi-amore chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
this is really good. you should be proud of yourself.

~ Bella
xXxUnReQuitEdxXx chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Wow.
Mer's4life chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
aw i love mer/mark! der is stupid and wited to long...an not to mention a PERV! what did he think watchiong them? gosh that perv!
atruwriter chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Beautiful! Sensual! Well written! Loved it entirely. Hope to read more from you soon!
MarianaTeresia chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
very good. I feel a little sad for Derek... and I don't even like him
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