Reviews for A Better Man Than I
MOH82711 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This was amazing! I love Mer/Mark too but not as much as MerDer :)I just wanted to say one thing that I'm not sure you know but I do cause I have litterly watched all the episodes 100 times but at the season 3 finale Derek was chosen as the new Chei but told Richard that he wasn't done being cheif...
iamkellylouise chapter 1 . 1/6/2010

can't think of any words for how good this is!
TVHollywoodDiva chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
CitronPresse chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
That is really so very good and beautifully written. Brilliant idea showing it all through Derek's POV. All the details of Mer and Mark's intimacy are wonderful.

So, Derek got Chief but lost Meredith. But, at any rate, it seems liked he's learned something and grown in this story! And, I love the closing line "Logic over emotion. He was a neurosurgeon for a reason; cardiology was too painful."
N chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
WoW! You just made me a convert to the MerMark ship.
Advo chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
So good! Thanks! I love Mar/Mer fics, he's one of my favourites on the show. I have always thought he was perfect for Mer and you're proving me right.
chocolateluver14 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
That was wonderful. I especially liked the last line:

"He was a neurosurgeon for a reason; cardiology was too painful."

You did a great job of narrating from Derek's point of view, and the way you wrote Mark was lovely.

Great work.
Libranfate chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
That was excellent...amazing even! Your talent level is absolutely off the charts! Truly outstanding work!
Bella-mi-amore chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
this is really good. you should be proud of yourself.

~ Bella
xXxUnReQuitEdxXx chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Mer's4life chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
aw i love mer/mark! der is stupid and wited to not to mention a PERV! what did he think watchiong them? gosh that perv!
atruwriter chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Beautiful! Sensual! Well written! Loved it entirely. Hope to read more from you soon!
MarianaTeresia chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
very good. I feel a little sad for Derek... and I don't even like him
mcdreamyreally chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Well well...the writing is really great!

But as a MerDer fan, I somehow doubt something like this would ever happen because they just love each other too much. But its a fic, so...

Anyway...I really enjoyed the reading. More soonish please :)
Surgery-Girl chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
I love it. It is GREAT writting!