Very good interpretation.

That was unbelievably good! I loved it!

That was so adorable; I loved it. Although it's actually biologically impossible for donkeys to reproduce. Anyhoo, that doesn't matter, because I loved the simple style in which this was written, and I love how you personified both Joshua and his mother, and how they had both seen Jesus. I just realized too, that Joshua actually has Jesus' real Hebrew name-Jesus is the Greek version. So, He actually would've been called Joshua in his lifetime. :D

Luv,

Miss Pookamonga ;-P

Oh wow. That was...great. Awesome. Started with the mother and ended with the son. I like it. -

*scowls* You stole my idea! I've been working on it for over a year, putting in scenes from the bible, and what not, I go to post the first chapter. and... Oh well.

*goes over to sulk*

Anyways it's a great short story...

-T.J

This is sweet!

Did you think of writing it in the format of a play? It would make a great Children's Easter Play.