|Reviews for Second Place|
| woo chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Zutara is gaaaaaaaay! Maiko ftw!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Omigosh. That was amazingly well written :D:D Its sad, but it gives me that heart-twisty feeling. It flows so well. :) such an awesome job.
| Chrysa Lite chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I LOOOOOOOOOVE Maiko so much, but this fic was so beautifully worked out I couldn't resist. :)
| foreverinlovewithyou chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Personally, I'm a Maiko shipper, but Zutara doesn't offend me too much. As long as there's no Mai bashing.
| 0namakiza0 chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
see, im actually a "maiko" fan, but i have no offense to "zutarians". (We all have our own opinions, right?)
now I'm all depressed... good story!
| SilentTears132 chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
OMG I always felt so sorry for Mai even though I love Zutara, sometimes I just want to read A Zuko Maific (is there a name for it even?). Your fic is so SAD! Now I want ZukoXMai (who really need a name )!
| afitre chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I like Azula.
| Wohitzi chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Dx Sad. You've actually managed to make me feel bad for Mai. Very well written, and what I like to think (hope) was happening off screen... Maybe.
| Kiminator Mark XII chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
*sighs* Bleh. Personaly, I hate zutara, but I think that this was very well written... see, now you've made me all depressed. Oh well, I know that there is no way that this would happen in the series so I'm okay.
Other than that little detail, again, this was incredibly written and overall I sort of enjoyed it. Oh, Agni, I'm going mad! *runs around the room screaming* (after gaining sanity) Woah, still secure in my Maikoness... YOU SHALL NEVER BRING ME OVER TO THE DARK SIDE, NEVER!
| Tessa Marlene chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Very well written. And I loved your note about Mai at the end although I must admit, I don't like her much. She's not pretty and not interesting. She holds absolutely no torch against Katara. I guess you can tell I'm a ZukoxKatara fan, which is why I'm glad this story emphasizes their love. Mai should look for another boyfriend, but I agree with you that she balances Azula's little gang.
| animekraze chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Awesome interpretation (greatformeasazutarianaswellXD) I saw that part in the trailer and I just started convulsing in anguish (apparantly, everytime i go ew at my computer, my mom thinks i'm watching porn XD).
I'm glad you put Mai in a more sympathetic and brighter light, as there is a lot of Mai hate.
I like Mai, too, but I think Ty Lee is awesome (for being the hyper-active girl). Azula just gives me nightmares.
| CultOfStrawberry chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
This was very well written, and realistic. Good job.
| pringle.sam chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
You know, I'd never thought about the creepy three in terms of hanging out with before... But you're right: give me Mai.
You actually made me feel sorry for her. Difficult, because, you know, Zutara for life.
Nice, in a depressing, apathetic, I don't like these characters, Great Gatsby kind of way :]
| who wants that knowledge chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Waffles for writing - dare I say it? - an in character Zutara fic.
waffles waffles waffles!
| Kyoshi7989 chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
This is so SAD...but a perfect version of a one-sided Maiko combined with Zutara.
It made me feel so bad for Mai...I felt like crying.
i'm sappy like that.