Reviews for Why?
crimsoneyes44 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
you still have lots of grammar mistakes: "Hika-chan and Kao-chan wants to play here!" - subject is plural, verb is singular.

but the content is very interesting. very thought provoking.
Avacados are evil chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
(has melted into a pile of warm and fuzzies)
PaolaAdara chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
that's nice. the feeling of the story always coming back to a certain point is just right to emphasize how kaoru really feels about the situation. and the ending is really cute.

xxBrokenxxAngelxx chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Aww that's cute. Just fluff, based on fact.

Love it ].
FailingDemi chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
You. Are. Boring. :p Deep. TOO DEEP! -faints-

I WAS WRINGIN' MEH HEAD TRYIN TO READ THIS! :p Yeah, okay. Showing a sisterly support. _