Reviews for Invincible
Rockandrollgirl123 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
OMG! I love this story it made me tear at the end...
Ginnyloveswriting chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
You were making James suicide?

Otherwise, a sweet story. Heart-touching. :)
L chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
1) The whole part about James whating Lily to carry his son who will someday end the war - just no. James was cocky but he wouldnt be that cocky about his son when he wasnt even with Lily yet.

2) There is no way James was suicidal. Its just not James. Nor is the Firewisky. Maybe the old James would drink but by their 7th year James had matured enough to stay away from it. But the suicidal thing was just absolutely uncharactoristic of James.
xxpiratexx chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Good-ish...good-ish.

It didn't help that I didn't know the song.

:(

I had no idea it was a songfic 'till I started reading it.

Oh, well.

Rose
PrincessTin chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
u do pic great songs for songfics and thats hard to do, believe me i know
OnTheVergeOfExtinction chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
That was very nice, even if the cliff thing has kind of been done. Your writing technique, though, completely saved it from being cliche. Your descriptions were very apt, and made for a great read.

(And I'm hoping that one of your favourite dead characters is Dobby, because, well, do we need an explanation? D )
Super Cara chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
cute idea, but i never would expect james to even think about jumping off a cliff. that invincible song was really cute ]
blackolives10 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
I agree, I think the song fits James perfectly.
TaintedxPerfection chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
cute story! :)