|Reviews for Betrayal|
| 368235 chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Oooo! OK, I promised I'd read your works, and here I have read this one. That was GORGEOUS! It was deep and heartfelt and REAL. These characters have so much to offer, and I don't find too many people who reaaaally take advantage of the pain and the anguish. But you did. And you did it beautifully. I love the temperance. The way the hysteria bubbles under the surface.
I actually don't have any criticisms! The tears I thought for an instance may have been a little too soon. But, really, they're not... they're totally appropriate. Actually, the only real thing I'd change is that wizards don't use tea-bags, they brew their tea with leaves. That's the only criticism I've got (and I usually always have got stuff to criticize)!
Yayy! Fantastic job ;) I need to read more of your works!
| HermyCaz chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
:D wheey...you should have more reviews than just one! I really like this...so good.
I like the tension between them..how Remus acuses Sirius, nearly immediately...but yes I really like it!
Thanks for a great read!
| MoonyIsTheMan chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Sad? It's depressing!