|Reviews for Where Your Treasure Is|
| Sampdoria chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
Thank you for the update. AS usual a well written chapter.
| cookiebubblegiggle chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
This is a very detailed and well written story, I can't wait for further chapters! :D
| Mooncat4 chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
Oh, cool - I really like this chapter. The changes in the Great Hall are awesome. Nice work on Minerva's speech, as well. Thank you for giving this to us and for another enjoyable read. Mooncat
| Barb8 chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
Looking forward to the meeting between Severus and Hermione.
| lipasnape chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
You seem to have embarked on a grand journey. I am very happy to accompany you. No need to reply to my review. Just keep writing the story as competently as you have so far.
| whitehound chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
Very well-written, and I love the way Snape uses his body-language to be subtly annoying. He's such a ham.
Several quibbles, though. It's firmly established that the attack on the Longbottoms happened substantially after Voldemort's fall - long enough that people had started to feel safe, so probably several months after. And it happened because Bellatrix and co had tried and failed to find what had happened to Tom, and this was a last resort. It's possible Hermione doesn't know this - but not very likely.
In what way is Snape supposed to be self-serving - or in what way could Hermione even think he was? He's passed his entire adult life in a poorly-paid job he appears to hate, much of it spent risking death and torture on a regular basis, subjugated to two masters both of whom in their separate ways abuse him, to atone for a mistake he made when he was little more than a child. He appears, in canon, to have no self-interest whatsoever, to a quite abnormal degree.
And what has Percy to be guilty about? His family treated him abominably. Bill and Charlie and Ron all sneered at him, the Twins actively persecuted him, and when he got a promotion (which we know was deserved, because JK said he later went on to become a high-ranking official) his dad's reaction was that it must have been a political move - implying that it couldn't be on merit.
Minor Britpick - should be sweet wrapper, not candy wrapper.
| Wingless Feather chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
lol Abercrombie? lol that is funny
| boolavogue chapter 11 . 8/10/2007
I just read the latest chapter and I must beg you to update very soon!
| Kedi chapter 12 . 8/10/2007
A very interesting story! I feel you've been true to the characters personalities, and you've given a plausible "alternate ending" - thanks for that, by the way! - and you're combining (or at least it seem so at the moment) two of my personal favourites, namely the SS/HG ship and a touch of Severitus' challenge. The story is well written with a good flow that just demanded that I kept reading. Very good! I'm eager to read more, hope you update soon. :) Keep smiling, and keep writing!
| Lawenta chapter 12 . 8/10/2007
This chapter is simply great. By my opinion you write these two as in character as possible and yet without falling into stereotype, and you have my admiration for that. I enjoyed every little exchange in this dialogue, for these characters written by you are living things stirring both my imagination and understanding. This chapter definitely is one of the highlights of the story up to now.
And by the way, I agree that free will must be involved for the whole thing to work out. And I can't wait for Snape to try keeping himself as far from Hermione as the events allow in order to save them both from dependency :-)
| Lilith Kayden chapter 12 . 8/10/2007
This story is vry good, and I will be eagerly looking forward to your Updates.
| Spirit Alchemist chapter 12 . 8/9/2007
In my years of reading fan fiction, I don't believe I've come across even one which had me enthralled by chapter two. Your story, written eloquently, has done well to cause emotions to arise within me as I sit here reading - not to mention it even made me giggle in anticipation of things that could possibly happen. I can't remember the last time I giggled over a non-published work. You have such talent! I am coming to find that I prefer this continuation of the story over the epilogue in book 7 "Nineteen Years Later." I find that fact rather odd since I enjoyed the epilogue as a closing of loose ends. Really, if I haven't made it clear already, I'm so very glad to be enjoying your story! Please continue!
As an aside, I love reading essays and philosophical works (It's actually a part of the major I'm completing this fall.) I'd be interested in reading the work concerning the "Marriage of True Minds" if you could provide me with a place to access those essays. These kinds of studies I find fascinating. :)
| doesnt-go-away chapter 12 . 8/9/2007
Damn I just found out this fic now, but already is one my favorites after DH. Really well written not just Snape(Oh my God *-*) but also Hermione, Harry and all of them. I truly loved the the 2nd chapter, the goodbye of Severus and Lily, that was awesome! I really prefer to think that this did happen. Please don’t take too long to post again.
| digio chapter 6 . 8/9/2007
hello...i really like your story! keep it up! ;D
| misundersnape chapter 12 . 8/9/2007
Interesting... very good. Poor Severus, well, maybe I should be saying poor Hermione, as at least Severus has an inkling as to what is afoot, Hermione is in the dark.